Th#5 AsYa FF Across The Shadows - Chapter 14 to 17 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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and she commented twice to leave th thread,..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was an awesome update Iqra..

Zoya!! Why are you doing this?? Poor Asad.. Broke his heart..

Moving with Nisha's mother wasn't a good idea.. I feel so bad for her..

Continue soon.. :)
Edited by pinks2911 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
oh bubble not again another cliffy...awesome update ..hope you are preparing for Eid!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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poor asad feel bad for him nd terrible for zoya,as everyone around her just played with her existence.continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update...
I knew it... after this kiss ...Zoe vl ruin d moment
Zoe said Its a mistake 🥺 😭 my poor asad 😒
bubble u made him break all furniture 😡
I love it though bt still hurts seeing asad like that

He never knew her reaction would be the worst and unbearable for him. Only if he knew then he would have waited for some more time. He was damn curious now to know what was haunting her so badly !

aww asad. .I love him bass.

saxena 😡 is so so bad 🤢
wat Zoe vl do now.. 😕 😭 ohh bubble save her
update soon 😛
Edited by Amulya9 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
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Congrats on the new thread Bubba... Very well deserved!!! 👏


First of all... i would really like to mention that this chapter has made me feel some mixed emotions...

the romance in the beginning made me feel like it was some fairy tale...
but again, when Prasad knocked at the door, reality knocked in too..!!

Zohura was so naive back then... and it really hurts when people like Mrs. Saxena take advantage of girls like her...

spectacular writing Bubba!!!! 👏

you are simply Awesome...and i have no words to explain how much i love you for coming up with such amazing concepts!!

can't wait to read the next, though i know what is going to happen to my poor girl!!
Edited by BeYourself - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
hay Bubble what&why do u do it yar?

here I was hopeing for "AsYa"to confess but got annoying Chapter. Really Dissapointed Buddy
Edited by imcooldude - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Ya allah!!
What all has Zoya/Zohura gone through...

I can't even think...

How could Mrs. Saxena be so cruel...?

Or is it just a trick by you to fool us...?

Never mind...

It was a very well written update...

Agla update soon and longer...!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congratulations fr d new thread 🥳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved the update. Feeling scared for Zoya.
Continue soon.

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