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Sanjhari

@Sanjhari

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

right now m just feeling what one must feel when they go through such a dreadful situation... I feel so bad for Zoya... she has gone through a lot...

hope she get out of all this soon...

cant wait for the next part...

wonderful concept... excellent execution...

congrats on new story...

continue soon...

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sanah12

@sanah12

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Awesome start
Loved it loads!!
Dr khan wow what a sight
Poor zoya I'm feeling so sorry for her but I'm sure asad will be there to support her always
Waiting to see how doc, patient love story goes
Do continue asap
Thanks for the pm

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Oh Sis!

This is plenty emotions!

Tear jerking. Wow.

How even.

Truly that song is one if a kind. The lyrics so very touching and the sing very captivating!

This is such a heavy story sis! I can only imagine what it's like penning it! Goodness! Brilliant stuff this is. Truly brilliant.

All in a matter if four weeks. Her life as she knew it gone. Akk bleak and horrible. The bruises, the mental agony, everything that she had to live with...broken indeed, she is!

Very touching and heartfelt Sis. You write from your heart, Sis. And this is one classic example.

Yes. The next part! Soon okay!

Love!

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Broken indeed she was. As he said wouldn't want to wish anything like this for even the worst enemy.

Brilliantly written and an overdose of emotions.

Me was sad already n now 😭😭😭

Please update soon sis can't wait for the happy ending.

Edited by LoveOnlyAsYa - 11 years ago

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Aapu!!!
It was just !
I don't knw what to say!!
Zoya poor baby!!
Hw much she gone through!!
Dr.Asad Ahmed khan ahaan!!
Waiting to read more!!

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-Astrid-

@-Astrid-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

I'm speechless...that was heartwrenching yet amazingly written😳...I'm hooked...continue soon😃

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Wow this was soo beautifully written ,,

I loved it ❤️

It was soo emotional and sad !!

Hope Dr Khan will help her out ,,

Update sooon 😊

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Maha

@maha2012

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Superb start👏
update soon Api😳

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treasure11

@treasure11

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

wow!!

Asad as a doc

And I love that sonng tooo❤️

nice concept!!!!

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Hey Sis,

This was fabulous. Both the song & the plot you've chosen.

Heart broken is what I felt after reading this. But it also forced me to think about those poor souls that by some mishap or destiny stumble on this path.

You've put across Zoe's feelings really well. I could feel the suffering & torture she went through. The helplessness she faced at the hands of those sick monsters. Her attempt at finishing her life was the limit. I had also this question in mind that why would anybody be subjected to such cruel fate? But the only thing that calmed me a bit over here was that Allah saved her innocence & He gave her out from all that.

Asad & Humeira seemed to me like the pillars of support she would have in future to lean on. Her instant connection with Humi & her being able to trust Asad with her past said so to me. Haider is a nice person too, he considered her health & frame of mind & gave it priority over his duty.

Your title is perfectly fitting with the scenario. It definitely is the word to describe someone who has bore so much & to top it all Zoe has had a bleak past too.

This was absolutely wonderful Sis. Looking forward to see how you take this forward.

Love..

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