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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

Wow this was soo beautifully written ,,

I loved it ❤️
It was soo emotional and sad !!
Hope Dr Khan will help her out ,,
Update sooon 😊


I am sure he will 😉

Thank you so much for liking it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: maha2012

Superb start👏
update soon Api😳


Thank u so much Maha 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: treasure11

wow!!

Asad as a doc
And I love that sonng tooo❤️
nice concept!!!!


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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey Sis,

This was fabulous. Both the song & the plot you've chosen.
Heart broken is what I felt after reading this. But it also forced me to think about those poor souls that by some mishap or destiny stumble on this path.
You've put across Zoe's feelings really well. I could feel the suffering & torture she went through. The helplessness she faced at the hands of those sick monsters. Her attempt at finishing her life was the limit. I had also this question in mind that why would anybody be subjected to such cruel fate? But the only thing that calmed me a bit over here was that Allah saved her innocence & He gave her out from all that.
Asad & Humeira seemed to me like the pillars of support she would have in future to lean on. Her instant connection with Humi & her being able to trust Asad with her past said so to me. Haider is a nice person too, he considered her health & frame of mind & gave it priority over his duty.
Your title is perfectly fitting with the scenario. It definitely is the word to describe someone who has bore so much & to top it all Zoe has had a bleak past too.
This was absolutely wonderful Sis. Looking forward to see how you take this forward.
Love..


Thank u so much Sis

Yes Asad an Humera did become her pillars of support, and even though afraid she managed to connect with the honesty she saw in his eyes and then went on to say what she had experienced.

Will update soon

Lots f love 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Shubh007

Amazing + heart touching concept...👍🏼

Poor zoya had suffer alot...

Not able to imagine her condition...😔

Those mans should be punished...😡

All over an awesome peice of work love it...👏

Waiting for nxt part so update soon...😃


Thank you so much sweetie 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

beautiful start...
it was so heart wrenching...
u made the tears come out of my eyes...
poor zoya has been thru so much...
glad she is in safe hands now...
hope she will b able to cope up vd all this...
continue soon...



Aaah sorry it made you cry


Thank you so much Aarzoo 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: aashiqua

Ma poor poor Zoya...update soon iwant a happy ending...


I have already promised one 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: rajsmi

Dr.Khan and a messed up, drugged Zoya...what a story!! Love it :-)


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Posted: 11 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Aneezarp27

poor zoya...i feel so bad for her! Thank god they found her in time..! Really...such a bleak past and terrific present!


Thank you so much for liking it, I appreciate you feedback 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: sageflower7

Oh God !! The pain!! The wretchedness of Zoya's situation was so graphic and gritty real. Felt a morbid pit in my stomach worrying about her.

Very well written piece. 👏
Thanks for the PM😊


Thank u so so much, I really appreciate your feedback

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