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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: imcooldude

Awsome Begining
Go with it.
&
I Loved It.


Thank yo so much kiddo

Hope u r well 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: p_s05

I heard this song for the first time on Qubool Hai, many months ago and immediately fell in love with it.

This is an agonizing story. No women or rather human should be subjected to torture of that degree or rather any torture. What makes this more tragic is the fact she was on vacation in the city and the last revelation of been an orphan. Thankfully she wasn't sexually violated.

On a brighter note, she's Dr.Khan's patient. AAK as a doctor is a rare occurrence but always a charming one. Look forward to the next chapter.

This is why I say, you're a talented writer, you offer a variation of concepts.


Thank u so much Prashni

I also first heard it on QH and it touched my heart. I was watching something a few days ago and it was playing in the background...and that was it I couldn't get it out 😆

It's true no one should ever be subjected to such cruelties but the sad fact is that young women are.

As part of my work I work with young girls who were drawn in to gangs and were sexually exploited,...one of my kids is currently in hospital suffering from paranoid schizophrenia 😭

It started off bleak but will pick up 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: nilusoni

Superb and emotional
gr8 work and very interesting
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon


Thank you so much my dearest 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Sanjhari

right now m just feeling what one must feel when they go through such a dreadful situation... I feel so bad for Zoya... she has gone through a lot...

hope she get out of all this soon...
cant wait for the next part...
wonderful concept... excellent execution...
congrats on new story...
continue soon...


Thank you so so much, I am so glad you liked the concept and how it came out

Lots of love
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: sanah12

Awesome start
Loved it loads!!
Dr khan wow what a sight
Poor zoya I'm feeling so sorry for her but I'm sure asad will be there to support her always
Waiting to see how doc, patient love story goes
Do continue asap
Thanks for the pm


Thank u so much Sanah

Hope u r well 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Oh Sis!


This is plenty emotions!

Tear jerking. Wow.

How even.



Truly that song is one if a kind. The lyrics so very touching and the sing very captivating!

This is such a heavy story sis! I can only imagine what it's like penning it! Goodness! Brilliant stuff this is. Truly brilliant.


All in a matter if four weeks. Her life as she knew it gone. Akk bleak and horrible. The bruises, the mental agony, everything that she had to live with...broken indeed, she is!




Very touching and heartfelt Sis. You write from your heart, Sis. And this is one classic example.



Yes. The next part! Soon okay!


Love!




Found you...there you are 😆

Thank you Einstein

Yes it is a heavy story line but one that becomes that much lighter

Love u lots 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa

Broken indeed she was. As he said wouldn't want to wish anything like this for even the worst enemy.

Brilliantly written and an overdose of emotions.


Me was sad already n now 😭😭😭


Please update soon sis can't wait for the happy ending.



Aaah sorry Sis rula diya...why were u sad, hope ur ok

Even with an overdose of emotions thank you for liking it 😊

Have not written next part will do during the week

Lots of love
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

Aapu!!!
It was just !
I don't knw what to say!!
Zoya poor baby!!
Hw much she gone through!!
Dr.Asad Ahmed khan ahaan!!
Waiting to read more!!


Thank u so much sweetie

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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Chahanya

Awesome written work


Thank you 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: ap3h7u

I'm speechless...that was heartwrenching yet amazingly written😳...I'm hooked...continue soon😃


Thank you so mch sweetie

Will update as soon as I have written the next part 😊

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