Mini SS - Broken: Part 5 (Completed) Page 61 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
Amazing + heart touching concept...👍🏼

Poor zoya had suffer alot...

Not able to imagine her condition...😔

Those mans should be punished...😡

All over an awesome peice of work love it...👏

Waiting for nxt part so update soon...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
beautiful start...
it was so heart wrenching...
u made the tears come out of my eyes...
poor zoya has been thru so much...
glad she is in safe hands now...
hope she will b able to cope up vd all this...
continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Ma poor poor Zoya...update soon iwant a happy ending...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
Dr.Khan and a messed up, drugged Zoya...what a story!! Love it :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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poor zoya...i feel so bad for her! Thank god they found her in time..! Really...such a bleak past and terrific present!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh God !! The pain!! The wretchedness of Zoya's situation was so graphic and gritty real. Felt a morbid pit in my stomach worrying about her.
Very well written piece. 👏
Thanks for the PM😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

Res
Unres !! 🥳

Yaaayyy i'm 1st !! Finally ! 😆 🥳
First of all u know how much i love this song !! ❤️ i'm lost in my own world right now ! even though the beginning was hard ! poor Zoya ! 😭
At least she has been found on time ! 😛
I love the way Dr. Khan tried to give her moral support but she was too numb to realize, but then when she woke up again, it was heartbreaking to see her so frightened ! 😭 she took support from Humaira ! 😛
Chalo she let Asad check on her, then finally opened up ! And what she has been through was worst than horrible, poor her, she had no fault but at that moment i loved Asad's words about the belief ! 👏 ❤️
Still today she has nobody to turn to ! 😭

Aapi !! This was just beautiful !! I dont have words to praise this !! 👏 but still i tried but know that i loved it more than i expressed ! ❤️

Love u Badi Aapi ! 🤗 ❤️


Hey Bano

Thank you so so much. Am glad that as emotional as it was you liked it so much

Love you too 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

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OH MY GOODNESS POOR POOR POOR POOR ZOYA.. all i could do is cry reading this :'( oh my goodness :'(

can u please update sooner please :'( my heart feels a hole deepening now :'(


Hey Ankie

Thank you so much for liking it.

I haven't even started the next part lol...but will do soon

You can wipe the tears away as I think that was most part of the emotional stuff lol

😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Divya.S.R

Beautiful start di.. 👏⭐️
It was emotionally perfect..
Zoya's body's reaction and her semi conscious state.. In which she tries to figure out her location and surroundings was beautifully penned.. 👏
Her trust in Humaira was too touchy.. 😊 she kept a hand on humaira afraid that she would left alone to suffer..
So she was saved from the hell like place..
Her description of what had happened to her was so emotional and heart-wrenching 😭
It's disgusting that people inflict such torture on innocent souls.. 😭
It must have be heartbreaking for her to see that girl being raped right in front of her eyes.. 😭
I think Asad will help her to get justice.. 👏
This line was perfect to describe her at present.. ⭐️👏
'it doesn't matter Dr Khan...I will be reliving the last four weeks of my life over and over again...for someone who once stood up tall and proud of her life and achievements...now there is only one word to describe me and that is Broken'.


Thank u so much Divya. I really appreciate you wonderful feedback.

I know it was a little too emotional...but I promised a happy ending 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: sasir

Amazingly written

Heart-touching
Plz update soon


Thank u so much Sasir 😊

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