Hey Again,
Now coming to the part. It made me remember all those days & I could see so clearly the flashes. My heart constricted with pain when AsYa returned to KV with tanveer. Seriously Asad was being a super jerk to Zoya.
You were saying that you can't re-create QH. Well I didn't want you too, I wanted you to show ho Asad felt every time he ignored, accused or hurt Zoe. I wanted to see his inner feelings which were so clear through his eyes but were never let out in QH. & you've done that so so v well. Really thank you soo much for showing this side to Asad.
Every time Asad hurt Zoe intentionally or unintentionally, my heart cried. I wanted to rush & embrace her in to a tight hug & tell her he's crazy & emotionally challenged.
I really loved the way you showed Dilshad's & Tamatar's support was with Zoe always. They gave her the same importance & love that she had earned through her sincere, innocent & abundant love for them. Thank you.
All the inner thoughts of Asad, his inner battle was so heart toucing. It really made me feel sad for him. The guy loved her a lot and the walls that were built around his heart were crumpling too but he had no idea how to initiate a convo or express his feelings. All he knew was to stay afar & suffer. Well here he made both of them suffer.
Bol na halke re do by Zoe made those scenes flash in my mind. Seriously you've done this successfully! I could so very visualize all this.
The way Zoe asked him about his feelings was so innocent yet heart breaking. This so strong willed, independent girl was scared of the hurt his 'no' would cause. But at last some sense made way into Asad's head. I loved this scene a lot. You've done this story complete justice.
My fav lines were AsYa's inner thoughts when Asad went into her room.
"What if I need you Asad?" "I will be here if you need me."
I can go on & on my fav lines here but that make it look like I copy pasted the whole thing.
Thank you once again for taking out time for something I just told you to consider writing on. It means a lot to me.
Lots of love coming your way...
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