Asya (KaBhi) OS: I wanted to know if you felt the same way

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Mojo that was fantastic dear. The whole thing recreated brilliantly. Loved it. Please send PMS for your updates

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treasure11

@treasure11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

You aree such a beautiful writer yaaarrr!!!!!

I am your fan now !!!!!!!saccchiii 😳

I love to read such instances from QH ...and u come up with such beautiful OS's ...

Please keep writing👏

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SH7_Sunny

@SH7_Sunny

Elite

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Awesome Blossom OS 🥳

I am telling u that I fet same way reading this OS 😳 🥳 😆

Write more OS'es now

Waise bhi UN name suggests ur daughter of AsYa as KaBhi 🤣

Toh kuch andar ki baat bhi update karna next OS mein 😆

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

wow tis is amazing...

totally fabulous...

beautifully written...

thx fr the pm...

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ak020203

@ak020203

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Wonderful OS..

Loved it...

Thanks for writing

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

"Protect me from his wrath, shower me with his... love"

💔 ❤️

""How... how do you feel?" Zoya managed to say looking down. He picked her face up so that she could look into his eyes.

"Why did you try to re-create that night today? So that I could remember? I remember-"

"I wanted to know if you felt the same way" Zoya spoke over him. Asad smiled.

"I've been wanting to tell you Zoya..." Zoya closed her eyes, her face still in his hands. "That I feel exactly the same way." Zoya opened her eyes and looked at him.

"You..." Zoya whispered.

"It took me so long to realise how much my heart actually understands your silence. I never thought that you could also feel the same way" Asad pressed his forehead against hers. "There's no-one else in this world that can cage my heart but you..." Zoya placed her hand over his on her cheeks; he smiled at her before placing her head on his chest wrapping his arms around her. Zoya smiled against his chest closing her eyes feeling his arms tighten, he felt the same way as her and she felt the same way as him."

This was beautiful.

The heartache before the sunshine was agonizing, had my stomach in knots. 🥺

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lovebluez

@lovebluez

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Omg that was an awesome OS!! Write more!!😊

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keyahira

@keyahira

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

OMG YAAR.
AWESOMENESS RIGHT THERE
After reading this, i cried
Why are you so freakin amazing

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Preeti

@FaultInMyStars

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

This is so so so so so so beautiful!!!!

This was OUR Qubool Hai...Brilliant one! Please write some moreee!!!

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Nim

@Rarepearl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Hey Sunshine,

Well I'll begin by a thank you. Thank You sooo very much Dearest for writing on my wanted topic. This really means a lot lot more than I can tell you. But maybe thanking you often can give a hint about it. So yeah, thank you!

I'm sorry for not replying to this Os earlier though it has been posted for me, just caught with work at home & two pagal kids.

Now coming to the Os. It was