Asya(Kabhi) SS' Two of a Kind Colab Note Pg 22

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Awesome update dear
Brother & sister meet but don't know each other
Chasmish is a good name after all he is zoya son
Curious to read abt daughter & father meeting & truth came out
Plz continue soon
Thanks for pm

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rjhr

@rjhr

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

wowww...

the pace of story is so good...

tnx 4 pm...

upd8 soon...

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Omg that was a heart wrenching last paragraph

So what the hell did asad do to separate his family

Aaira almost met the abbu he was an arms length away

Asad felt a pull to her voice

So zak and aaira met he called her chashmash he fell like he have know her all his life

He is remind of his father when he see her he want to make her smile

Can't wait for them to discover the truth when they will put the pic together

They both yearn for their abbu and ammi

Continue soon

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Morsmorde

@Morsmorde

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#104

So aaira landed in India and is in the same camp as zakaria :)

Both twins wants ammi and abbu's love

What happened in the past that Zoe had to leave.

Why she said that I was only yours asad?

Waiting eagerly <3

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...parth...

@...parth...

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#105

how many ch left?

i'll read once u finish this one 😛

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#106

wonderfull n amazing...

luv it...

fabulous...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

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ssrdj

@ssrdj

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Very emotional update

Asya separated but still in love

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Interesting story with a different concept !!

Update soon (:

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#109

i really like this story...
children are the ones who are gravely effected by their broken families...n the display of emotions that both the siblings are undergoing is heart-wrenching...
god!! what's up with this past thing?? what n y did asad send them away...??
misunderstanding or what??
there r so many questions...hope we'll get the answers soon...
update asap

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AshesToDustPM

@AshesToDustPM

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#110

I am sorry i read it quite a while back but dint post a comment... i really liked the first chapter and this one too you guys have great skills there... comendable work! the story so different and captivating... i had to recheck if it finished where i finished it...was so gripping!

do keep me informed about the coming chapters Princess!

Update soon!

Suri.