Asya(Kabhi) SS' Two of a Kind Colab Note Pg 22

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Hey guys,

So me and my friend Mojo you might know her from her amazing piece Abbu. We both have wrote this SS together and we hope you guys will enjoy it. We hope you guys like this please leave your likes and comments if you enjoyed it, it means a lot to us.

Without further ado enjoy the SS :D


SS: Two Of A Kind

Prologue

I, Zoya Farooqui.

I, Zoya Asad Ahmed Khan. I have never felt so alone despite those three names attached to mine. Attached. How is it that I still feel attached to those names despite being distanced from the owner of those very names?

As I stare out of the window, eighteen years later, I feel alien to the place I once used to call home. In these 18 years, I could not accept them neither could they accept me. Because I do not belong here.

But how could that place be home? How could I belong to someone who broke everything that I could say was alive in me?

"How are you?" She whispered into my ears wrapping her arms around my waist and resting her chin on my shoulders.
How am I?
I stared out of the window and watched the rain seeking an answer.

It was the same rain that I loved, that drowned me.

That's how I felt. That's what she came to save me from.

My 18 year old daughter. Aaira... The reason I live now, the light in my dark and gloomy life. She is the reason I am still alive after the incident 18 years ago.

I. Asad Ahmed Khan.

Have never felt so miserable and depressed in these 18 years.
The day she left me 18 years ago has left me alone, shattered and heartbroken.

I may have everything one could want in this world except her. My Zoya.

That wicked day has made my life a living hell, the place where she once made it a home has now turned into a house with only furniture and one lifeless soul.

"Hey Abbu how are you?'' I hear his concerned voice behind my back.

How am I? I am a living corpse, my body might be here but my heart and soul is with the person I truly love.

My... No Our son. Zakariya.
The only gift I have left from her since the wretched day.

But, fate has been cruel. This gift is not a gift but a curse. I open my arms seeing her in my heart's mirror but close them when her deceptions reflect from them. I love him, but I cannot hold him.

Has he come to save me or drown me? I stared out of the window finding his reflection against the glass,

The rain can only drown you.

Aaira Zoya Ahmed Khan and Zackariya Asad Ahmed Khan, so different from each other yet one. One saved her from drowning, the other drowned him.

This is a story about two individuals, who are two of a kind but connected by one thing; their parents. What happens when two twins meet after 18 years of separation? Will they be able re-unite the two lovers who have drowned in love or will they end up destroying the only thing keeping them from dying; their memories.

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MrMrsAsyaKhan thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Edited by MrMrsAsyaKhan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really beautiful prologue
Y do my poor asya always get separated
Anyway continue soon
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very nice concept plz continue soon plz
cant express
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Very nice ..Please continue..
Thanks for pm..😳
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Yar my like button is not working. Pleasr count my like but
Now i am off to read.
Res...



UNRES 😳

WOW its fab 👏
So its like asad had done some mistake 8 years ago and poor zoya left him from then taking her daughter aria with her.
And leaving the poor child Zack [sorry difficult name ]
Behind her 😭
Ouch that hurts 🤢

Are they trying to save their parents from the long lost depression?
Well then i can only say. Love only saves, its the suspicion in lover's eyes who breaks any bridge of trust and brings out the worst in any relationship.

I can surely guarantee that they would neither be saved nor be drown because we have option three...boss swim along the waves anf explore😎
Love is only one term emotions. And emotions are like a sea you have to float all your life coz there is no END 😳

BADA COMMENT DIYA 😲
I AM SO PROUD OF MYSELF FARI 👏 ⭐️ 😆
AND THIS STORY IS ALREADY LIKE TAREN ZAMEEN PAR 👏 😆
Edited by Naughty-Noshi - 11 years ago
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Comment unress on page 1😎
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awesome and interesting
plz pm me for updates
continue soon
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I am totally loving this concept...
good start guys :)
continue soon !
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I loved it

Thank you for the PM

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