ASYA/KaBhi SS: Red, the colour of love Final Part/ Page 19

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jazsidhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

wonderfull n amazing...

luv it...

very interesting...

asad is always dreaming about zoya...

thx fr the pm...

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treasure11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Hey

Am soo soo soo loving this one 😳

Please update soon !

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SimplySmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

When are you updating, you cannot just end the chapter tight there, please please please please update soon

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: SimplySmile

When are you updating, you cannot just end the chapter tight there, please please please please update soon

Ahaha please don't make me feel guilty for posting it. I wanted to get views on whether anyone would like me to start it after Ramadhan. I had it written up months ago. Forgive me lovely, you'll have to be a little patient. I don't write anything over Ramadhan but I promise to update as soon it it's over and it'll be like a hugeee update like my last SS.

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Prashni Singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

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'Stop thinking about others aapi. For once please think about your own happiness. I will never be able to answer to mama baba. You have sacrificed your whole life for us. If only you agreed to marry without the condition of us settling first. Aapi I want the world's happiness for you. A guy that will know your value, that will bow down in awe of your strength. Who will respect you and love you selflessly. I pray for that kind of love, that kind ofhusband, for you. And if he ever falls in my destiny, I will change that destiny for you'

"'Bond of the hearts' He whispered, 'Baba saved those lines for you. You will get yourself not a husband but a life partner. Both of your existence will be a symbol of your bond, your love, like the colour red. Red is not just a colour of love, red will be a colour of your love.' Aleem laughed with Zoya, 'baba loved red didn't he, I still remember him asking mama to wear red on every occasion. He used to buy a red rose for her every day.' He sighed remembering their parents. 'I believe it too aapi' He met her eyes,..."

"'That he will be your red' He winked, she tapped his cheek playfully, 'Really, you will find someone who will never get tired of loving you, who will never stop appreciating you, who will never stop thanking the Almighty for you. Watch aapi, both of your hearts will bond in such a way; everyone will be left in awe of your relationship. I pray every day to Almighty that you receive the world's happiness. If only you didn't agree to marrying without settling us first. But your brother makes a promise today; I will fulfil all your wishes' He smiled to himself."

'My aapi's prayers have come true. I got the job because of her, FOR HER. And for her only'

'Whatever I earn or will earn will not be enough to pay back my sister's seconds she has put into bringing me up."

This is simply fabulous, conceptualization and dialogues have left me spellbound. Zoe's responsibilities and love for her siblings is overwhelmingly remarkable. Asad's restlessness and agitation is endearing.

You are a talented writer, this is just wow, you write like the over enthusiastic part of my imagination that lives in a fairy tale fizz.

Every character has been written beautifully. Zoe with her siblings picturesque.

P.S Butter to a burn isn't a helpful home remedy. 😉

Highly anticipate the next chapter.

'What kind of a situation am I in? These restless feelings, these questions are driving me crazy. But they're all in here' He pointed to his heart and then his mind, 'I can't even practically solve this problem. I seriously need help'

Asad's dialogue remindered me of this expression: 😳 😆

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fifi1297

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Amazing..

Loved it..

Beautifully written...

Continue soon...😊

Thnx for pm

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anopama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Very nice start

It will be an amazing story

Zoya responsible for her siblings

Fix Aliyah marriage to asad even though dilshad wanted her

Asad dreams of a mystery woman in red every time she wears red

But he never sees her face

He was electrocuted when he touch her and both of them got burn the same time

Asad wants to meet zoya the sis that took care of her siblings

He is not too happy with Aliyah

The only thing I would not like is for the engagement to happen between Aliyah and asad

Bcuz when her sis will fall for him it will not be nice

Continue

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SimplySmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: MrMrsAsyaKhan

Ahaha please don't make me feel guilty for posting it. I wanted to get views on whether anyone would like me to start it after Ramadhan. I had it written up months ago. Forgive me lovely, you'll have to be a little patient. I don't write anything over Ramadhan but I promise to update as soon it it's over and it'll be like a hugeee update like my last SS.

Okay dear, I understand now. But seriously as soon as this month is over, you better get out your writing pad and pencil and start writing

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Asif

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Awesome update
Nice start
Asad dream abt girl in red
He will go for engage but his heart said no
He respected zoya for whatever she did bravely
Both meant for each other. They selected same rings, overslept & winced with hot coffee & tea
Plz continue soon
Thanks for pm

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Nim

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Hey Dearest,

You've left me awed at this one. It is really a beautiful story. I will have to give it to you for portraying all the emotions so brilliantly.

Asad's constant dreams of a girl in red, his longing to see the face behind the red, his intuitions, heart ache on getting tied to someone else & his respect for the bride's sister was described very well.

Zoya's sacrifice for her family brought tears to my eyes. Their bonding was heart touching. Its rare to find siblings like Zoya who give up everything even the happiness coming in their part.

Where did you get the lines of "bonds of heart". It was awesome. The scene where Asad chose Zoe's choice of ring & she remembered her dad's words was my fav. They were really beautiful, it reflected pure love. Her dad's words are coming true, they definitely are joined by the hearts. Both of them got a burn together.

I hope after all these years of tests Zoe gets her due share of the goods in life & she will once Asad enters her life. He already understands her position & the trials she went through & respects her. I'm sure once he finds out who she is, he'll shower the worlds joys on her.

I guess Asad will recognize her now that she has practically landed in his arms but I hope he gets to say something & cancel this engagement.

You've made me remember my AsYa.🤗

Love lots..