ASYA/KaBhi SS: Red, the colour of love Final Part/ Page 19

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#121

I really liked this story...

Was very different but amazing

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Amina...

@Amina...

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#122

I Just Read All The Parts In One Go ...!!!
Its A Minblowing Story ...!!!
Simply Beautiful And Amazing
Very Very Very Beautifully Written ...!!!
Every Emotion , Every Feeling Was So Beautifully Expressed That I Have No Words To Praise ...!!!
Just Loved it ...!!!

I have purposely choosen the red colour because i am also feeling red about the story 😳 just loved it ❤️

Continue writing like this , you are an Amazing writer Dear 😊

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#123

Pretty Please with a Cherry on top, write more of this kind of fluff!

I remember this was a fiction over a large time frame, amazingly awesome was this concept, AsYa and everything "Red".

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#124

Oh and I loved the fact that they didn't proceed with the Haldi after all the sister drama that was created.

And And And

The comment about going to play early holi.

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Avie

@Avie

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#125

Mojo, this is one of my most favourite stories..

Sad to see it end though..

The whole story was just fabulous.. Finally Zoya and Asad both found their Red.

Love the beautiful bond between Zoya and her siblings..

Do write more these kind of stories..

Thanks for the pm.

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#126

Chap 6
Wonderful update
Asad confessed his love to Zoya & tried to make her understand but she just remembered her uncle words. She beg for asad to marry her sister even though she knew that he didn't love her. Aleem & najma in a plan & they are hopeful. Asad Zoya convo was nice. Like dilshad asad scene. A mother always felt what her child was feel. Zoya fell down & asad caught her. Will read next one soon. Sorry for being late. Thanks for pm

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#127

Awesome update with epilogue
Asad spoke to aliyah & told her that he love Zoya. Finally her uncle entry. He taunted her but her siblings were there for her sister. Nonsense abt Zoya & he got a punch of his life from asad. Liked their confession again in red. It was a beautifully written story. Thanks for pm