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Alone111

@Alone111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Kya boloon ????

Dil ko chuliya...

After that I hv nthng to say...

So aliyah nd ayaan.. Thy both knw echother before too...
Thnk god ayaan was there.. Lolll

Plz plz continue soon..

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

good update...well written..👍🏼

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Prashni Singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

*sigh*

This should be a daily.

Shall return with a detailed comment soon.

P.S The name is Prashni 😳

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ak020203

@ak020203

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Very nice update..

It is getting complicated. . Waiting to see how you will twist it..

Thanks for the update

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...parth...

@...parth...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

y Asad is Ogling his Saali???😆

awesome concept

i think Aleem n Aliya have planned something for AsYa ...

eagerly waiting for ur next update.

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keyahira

@keyahira

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

I LOVED IT,
YOU SHOULD DEFINITELY MAKE THIS INTO A SS,
AWESOMENESS RIGHT THERE

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Nim

@Rarepearl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Hey Sunshine,

I loved this one! But one complain, why are you making my babies suffer so much? I felt so sad for both of them. Both couldn't pinpoint the reason they were getting attached to the other just on their first meeting. Is Asad pagal, why couldn't he recognize her eyes at least? I was dreaming of him realizing who she was & here he's just following her around clueless.

I loved the bit where they put on the rings on each other's hands without thinking. Higher intervention making the rightful ring land in Asad's finger that too by Zoe.

I don't know how she does it but she amazes me to no limits by her self sacrifice for her family. She's so young herself but treats her siblings as her babies. Hats off to her!

I liked how Zoya & Asad could talk easily but upset that they can't get what their hearts want.

I am really scared for Asad. What is going to do next? It is a huge step to marry someone when you love the other. I liked his spirit & will to do anything to bring smile on Zoe's face.

Poor Ayaan. Aww both the brothers are sad. Can Ayaan not tell Asad about it?

Oh Mr. Protective Ahmed Khan is always a treat. Loved how he adjusted her pallu unconsciously & made the men flee & glared at them for ogling Zoe.

Please update soon. And I'm super gad you watched laal duppata otherwise how would I have got this beautiful story.

Love..

PS.. I hade one more complain. This was too small an update.

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Heena

@aarzoo50

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

i luv it...
beautiful piece of writing...
plz get ayaan hooked up vd aaliya jaldi jaldi...
so that AsYa rasta saaf hojaye

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

awesome updt

Asya likes each other

& Ayaan likes Aliya

very complicated

loved it

continue soon

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

wonderfull n fabulous...

luv it...

felt really bad for zoya...

asad n zoya made each other wear the ring first n are destined for each other...

ayaan likes aliya...

beautifully written...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

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