SS Once Upon a Time Thread II CH9/10 Updated!!! Pg 122/127 (11th July)

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chaithra02

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Posted: 11 years ago

#311

Amazing update.. Asad likes zoya from his school days itself... I am waiting for the kiss

Update soon

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Surish

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Posted: 11 years ago

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aman

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Posted: 11 years ago

#313

i just loved the update...
so eager for next update

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ak020203

@ak020203

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Posted: 11 years ago

#314

Nice update :)

Last few are really funny.. she does not know anything about music or not follow his career.. and she is interviewing him.. Would wait to see what Zoya would explain now..

Thanks for the update

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Young And Horny!

@Perfectionist2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#315

I read Chapter 6 and I liked it a lot.

Its simple and sophisticated and I remember you mentioning that you will go with the flow.

And I think this flow suits you..

Rest when I find time to catch up on the chapters before...

GRRR! Don't get started, I warned you I am your worst reader.

But oodles of love.😃

Juliet

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DevikaRavish

@DevikaRavish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#316

Aashna.. Finally we get an update to read.. and plzzz stop telling that you are not happy with what you have written.. It was just WOW.. 😊

Coming to the update.. Aww.. the rain dance and both in their world.. he was not able to sleep because of it.. and she had a good sleep dreaming about him.. 😊

Yep I read your earlier comment on why she was not able to google much about him... When he asked about his songs.. she was tongue tied.. that must have so very embarrassing to Zoya.. No doubt he is a big man..and she is here to interview him and it must be surprising and equally amusing to Asad that she is not aware of his music nor his popularity...

The small things which you describe.. for example his rugged look having coffee.. and how she felt like running her hands in them.. is so very mesmerizing... He was surprised to find her ready and offered to go with her.. that was so very sweet of him...

The dress scene was another highlight of the update... The way he was juggling his thoughts that it is only physical and too early and later on noticing her goose bumps he understood that he affected her which gave him confidence.. beautiful choice of words there...What I liked was she managed to prepare coffee for him in between...

Now Zoya did affect him in his high school days as well. He remembers her smile, laughter and smell.. cool.. but he is finding it hard to remember her face...?? You will Mr. Khan at the right time I guess...

On the whole another WOW update from you Aashna .. I am so so eager to read more on this.. I feel like a teenager reading this story.. beautifully written buddy.. and you know how much I love your works...Keep it going.. and plzz update soon dear..

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Bubbles_buttons

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Posted: 11 years ago

#317

Now that was an amazing update! How can u say u weren't happy with it, have more confidence in ur writing, it was good, u had explained everything in good detail, I could actually picture it vividly in my head. 😊

Oh I see u gave us a tiny hint as to what maybe in the next update, I hope all the things u mentioned do actually happen! 😳

Thanks for the lovely update and for pming me
Please do continue soon. ❤️