SS Once Upon a Time Thread II CH9/10 Updated!!! Pg 122/127 (11th July)

First Previous

Page

100

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Prazeena Bhattarai

@Aneezarp27

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#331

Beautiful update...

THey danced and the aftermath of that..Asad couldn't sleep...LOL

He's looking at his highschool memories.. HE has HER folder...HE remembers everything about her except her face,,,hawww ! Not fare..

Woah! The scene at Zoya's bedroom was just too amazing ! LOved it...Loved their closeness...

Asad's going straight to the point !
Questioning Zoya why she is blushing and about his mucis..

Zoya really doesn't follow his music? 😲

Anyway! Eager to read the next part!

UPdate soonish !

Love

Anee

Quote

TaiLung

@TaiLung

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#332

wow that was an awesome update

i was blushing more than zoya while reading the story 😳

i cant say how much i liked the update

asad and his high school flash backs were superb

i really thoght 2 times they are going to break the barrier but no

cant wait for the next update

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#333

""But she, she has something on me...her presence makes me feel out of sorts..he simplicity and her innocence stirs the latent desires of my once very romantic heart..She makes me want to write music...makes me want to recite a ballad and serenade her...I want to woo her,make her like me.I want to talk long hours with her, heck I want to interview her and find out about her."

Charming! ⭐️

I found the intimate interaction and the short, hesitant conversations through the chapter beautiful. ❤️

Anticipate the next chapter.

Quote

jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#334

fabulous...

luv it...

asad turn to interview zoya...

he help her with wardrobe malfunction...

both asad n zoya are falling hard for each other...

he found her old book...

amazing...

eagerly waiting for the next part...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

Quote

Abi

@-ABI-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#335

Originally posted by: -StarsLinedUp-
First of all Thank u for liking and commenting..I amglad u enjoyed the update..

And secondly..I am not stopping writing..infact I plan to write more...but where I write and what I write will change...

These two..for now are my last stories..and after that..I would be focusing on my blog writing stories there...So u can always follow me there and keep reading...

First thanX for replying,usually i didn't get reply of my comment

And i am really happy to know that u 're contunieing writting even after these two

and u had also asked me to follow ur blog,which i gladly want to, but( u might laugh at me) I don't know how to? since i m new in all this

so, can u help. Please

Quote

Heena

@aarzoo50

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#336

i loved it...
asad reminiscing high skool days...
zoya yaad aake b pehchaan mai nahi aayi...
i hope that heart shaped birthmark helps there...
both were very much affected by their late nyt dancing...
the hook scene seemed sort of cute to me... infact i was thinking birthmark he vl notice thn only... bt...
car ride interaction was lovely...
zoya is stuck... wt does she answer now...
continue soon aashna

Quote

jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#337

awsm update.
Superb one.
Thanx 4 d pm.
Cont asap.
T.c..

Quote

anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#338

It was a nice update

Asad insomnia him just remembering what happened in the rain

Then I don't know what lead him to go down memory lane

Goes through his high school stuff and have some good and bad memory

Then he came across her folder thought he give it back to her how he still has it

Oh he remember some vivid things about the girl whose folder he has but still no name and no face to that girl

Oh zoya wakes up relishing last nite too she loves his messy look

So don't think too much on what to pack really she ask the guy if she can shower

So the dress stuck in the bra so good he is in a tangled mess and her

He see she is affected by him as he is so it is not a one way street

Oh he confirms she is a matching girl

So the drive is uneasy the man just saw her in a bad spot

So he decided to learn about her and then he realizes she knows nothing about him

He is amused she is interviewing him and don't know of like his music

Continue

Quote

904910

Suspended

Posted: 11 years ago

#339

Luvd the SS..😳

you are an amazing writer..pl pm me..😊

Update Soonish..

Quote

Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#340

girl are you kidding me? You say this part wasn't good? Plz dont be so down to earth! The update was OH MY GODDD!

That dress scene made me squirm no winder what these two idiots must be going through! 🤣

I cant believe that folder is still with him i mean didnt Zoya ask it back? 😳 Im just waiting for the time he realizes she is the owner of that folder I wanna know his reaction which will be a perfect kodak moment 🤣

Bas thats all...next update...San Diego...maybe school visit...maybe kiss...a lot of maybe's...

NO NO NO NO NO maybe's! yes we want a school visit and yes we want a kiss and yes we want many more things