AsYa(kabhi) FF:It Takes Two To A Tango THREAD 2 ASYA BEGIN - Page 30

Originally posted by: suganti

interesting story

love zoya's character here

pls continue soon and thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: teju_KaBhi

nice story
so far it is good
thnks 4 pm
cont soon

Originally posted by: ican

wow from the beginning of my ff i wanted a chapter wise review/comment thanks do read other chapters, links and tell me thanks WELL IN THE SECOND CHAPTER DID YOU READ GAUFFARS FATHER'S VIEWS HE SAID HE LIVED LIFE TO FULLEST BECAUSE HE NEVER HAD TO COMPROMISE ADD WHAT HE COULDN'T GET FROM ONE WIFE HE GOT FROM ANOTHER AND DID YUPPY READ RASHIDS VIEWS IN CHAPTER 1 PLEASE READ I HEREBY declare you my OFFICIAL CRITIC DO TELL ME YOUR VIEWS ABOUT OTHER THINGS TO THANKS

Originally posted by: potternerd

Lovely update👏

Continue soon😊

Originally posted by: ican

wow love your comments you totally rock and you're awesome well yeah ZOYA ISNT SELFISH IT'S JUST THAT SHE ISN'T SELFLESS SHE BELIEVES TO LIVE OTHERS YOU MUST FIRST LOVE YOURSELF AND ... SHE ALSO IS VERY MISCHIEVOUS AND A FEMINIST AND SHE AND ASSAD ARE GOING TO FIGHT THE GIRLS V/S BOYS WAR DID YOU READ THE HUM TUM LINK ASAD AND ZOYA ARE GOING TO BE LIKE THAT BEFORE THEY BECOME FRIENDS AND IN THE STORY WHEN YIU READ INCIDENT 2,3,4 YOU'LL KNOW SHE AND JASZ DO GO TO TEACH WOMEN AND THEY LIKE TO PORTRAY THEMSELVES AS NIGHT IN SHINING ARMOUR TO THE DAMSEL IN DISTRESS THEY BELIEVE IF BOYS CAN DO CAN THEY THEY BOTH HAVE LEARNT KARATE AND zoya did tell her dad to take humi to the exhibition the next day
And they EVEN HAVE OPENED THEIR OWN PRIVATE WOMENHELO/DETECTIVE AGENCY

Originally posted by: AshesToDust

Chapter 3

oh fine... so Dilshad and Shireen are twins. and then poles apart. oh back then family, rshid's, could really force him int a marriage but i think his dad is a little sane. i liked that they agreed to bring in an educated doctor bahu. i hope they dont pasand Shireen instead... the way Dilshad was planning the evening anything could be up the sleeve.

One more thing... could you only space out the update a little... it becomes really hard to read.. the lines are so congested.

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

<font size="2">I even asked u abt Ayaan n Humeira. I said dat a lot of people feels weird if d girl is elder than boy but I don't feel weird at all. Its common nowadays. In college, a guy can fall in love wid his senior. So, r u planning Ayaan n Humeira? R u making Ayaan as MCP for once which no one may hv done? For d 1st time, I don't want AyRa. It vl be weird to see Humeira being obedient n docile to Ayaan. If Ayaan vl be cool then I wud want Ayaan wid Jasleen😊.</font>