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Azraa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#281

Love Zoya's attitude.. Can't wait to see how Asad turns out to be

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Posted: 11 years ago

#282

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04
Hey dear, I vl come again to comment.


Wats ur name?


Awesome Update👏😊


I am happy wid d way u made Zoya as a little bitchy type


I am fed up of seeing her mahaan


R u going to pair Humeira wid Ayaan?


Age difference is okay.


If d guy can be elder than girl then y it can't be d vice-versa?


There r many serials in which girls r elder than boys


Zoya accidentally married Ayaan in d show n she was elder than him.


Humeira elder is okay but it vl be weird to see her being docile to Ayaan.


I want Jas to be paired wid Ayaan n they r of d same age.


R u planning to make Ayaan as MCP for a change?


Do update soon n PM me😃

wow love your comments you totally rock and you're awesome well yeah ZOYA ISNT SELFISH IT'S JUST THAT SHE ISN'T SELFLESS SHE BELIEVES TO LIVE OTHERS YOU MUST FIRST LOVE YOURSELF AND ... SHE ALSO IS VERY MISCHIEVOUS AND A FEMINIST AND SHE AND ASSAD ARE GOING TO FIGHT THE GIRLS V/S BOYS WAR DID YOU READ THE HUM TUM LINK ASAD AND ZOYA ARE GOING TO BE LIKE THAT BEFORE THEY BECOME FRIENDS AND IN THE STORY WHEN YIU READ INCIDENT 2,3,4 YOU'LL KNOW SHE AND JASZ DO GO TO TEACH WOMEN AND THEY LIKE TO PORTRAY THEMSELVES AS NIGHT IN SHINING ARMOUR TO THE DAMSEL IN DISTRESS THEY BELIEVE IF BOYS CAN DO CAN THEY THEY BOTH HAVE LEARNT KARATE AND zoya did tell her dad to take humi to the exhibition the next day
And they EVEN HAVE OPENED THEIR OWN PRIVATE WOMENHELO/DETECTIVE AGENCY

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Adi my pet name

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Posted: 11 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: Azraa01
Love Zoya's attitude.. Can't wait to see how Asad turns out to be

Thanks for your comments DO READ THE HUM TUM LINKS THEY ARE AT THE BOTTOM OF CHAPTER 6
TO KNOW ABOUT ASADS CHARACTER CLICK ON THE LINK BELOW AND READ THE FIRST POST ON PAGE 1
link to asads character
Keep reading, liking and recommending my ff thanks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: aarzoo50
lovely update..
zoya is having a lil bit different character here...
apni ammi pe gai hai...
continue soon

well thanks for your comments DO READ MY HUM TUM LINKS TOO THEY ARE AT THE END OF CHAPTER 6
well ya zoya is not selfish but is not selfless too she is very naught and a big FEMINIST asad and zoya will be like the hum and tum ZOYA BELIEVES IF BOYS CAN SO CAN GIRLS SHE AND JASZ LOVE TO BRR NIGHT IN SHINING ARMOUR TO THE GIRLS IN DISTRESS THEY EVEN HAVE OPENED THEIR PRIVATE WOMEN HELP/DETECTIVE AGENCY

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Posted: 11 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-
nice story...all the way from asya's grandparents...
asad n zoya r yet to meet...i am waiting for that moment...
continue soon

asya will meet in the 10 chapter hope YOU READ THE HIM TUM LINK IN CHAPTER6 AND SAW THE LINKS OF CHAPTER 5 A&B THANKS keep liking, reading and recommending my ff

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Posted: 11 years ago

#286

Originally posted by: aseelashah
Dear i read both chapters together cause i am too much in a huury now a days
Sorry for the delayed response dear

The update was superb & pics are amazing

This Zoya is a hardnut to crack😆

She & her antics are so cute & funny too

She achieve what she wanted by hook or crook

I like that hum tum cartoon pages too

its so funny

Pls update soon dear

Thanks for pm😃

it's okay atleast you read them week in the 6 th chapter i mentioned your name in the starting do seer or thanks hope you liked hum tum links

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#287

Originally posted by: ican
asya will meet in the 10 chapter hope YOU READ THE HIM TUM LINK IN CHAPTER6 AND SAW THE LINKS OF CHAPTER 5 A&B THANKS keep liking, reading and recommending my ff

yup i saw the hum tum strips...

waiting for the next update😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: AshesToDust
Hi Suri here... may i know your name plz?
i'll be giving in my comments chapter wise as i get time to read them..hope its fine.

Chapter 1

So it starts back in time with Rashid... i havent read any such stuff before. Good for a change.
the main thing in this chapter was 'The Old Times' and the traditions ruling that era. well some of them still exist, and hopelessly, arent being worked upon. the way men refrained to give women their space and the right to education still saddens. then the thing you mentioned about women being imprisoned in the thoughts men possess. i like how you reflected that time and the circumstances in your words.

Chapter 2

Oh well polygamy has not much been prevalent in the dominating class of Pakistan. what is Sid's mother's name by the way?
its a typical situation where wives cant accept the others and the Shohar is screwed up between them.

well personally this concept of multiple marriages is really disturbing for me... do you plan to continue exposing this concept through your work? because it takes two to tango not three four...kidding!

wow from the beginning of my ff i wanted a chapter wise review/comment thanks do read other chapters, links and tell me thanks WELL IN THE SECOND CHAPTER DID YOU READ GAUFFARS FATHER'S VIEWS HE SAID HE LIVED LIFE TO FULLEST BECAUSE HE NEVER HAD TO COMPROMISE ADD WHAT HE COULDN'T GET FROM ONE WIFE HE GOT FROM ANOTHER AND DID YUPPY READ RASHIDS VIEWS IN CHAPTER 1 PLEASE READ I HEREBY declare you my OFFICIAL CRITIC DO TELL ME YOUR VIEWS ABOUT OTHER THINGS TO THANKS