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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

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Posted: 11 years ago

#301

Originally posted by: ican
well no ayan wont be a mcp but asads one groupmate farhaan is going to be mcp ayra are the endgame but there are many things in between and jasz will be with asads best friend karan

Glad dat u may be d 1st writer to show a girl elder than boy. Everyone sud understand dat its okay for even a girl to marry a younger guy. Even Jodha(by 22 days) n Salima(by 4-5 years) were elder than Jalal. I am fed up of always seeing a guy elder than girl by more than 3-4 yrs. I am happy wid u showing AyRa but plz don't make Humeira like Razia till d end. It vl be ridiculous to see Humeira listening everything to Ayaan as his gf n Ayaan ordering her around like a slave. Hope Humeira too becomes modern. Hope Zoya n Jasz dump Farhan in d gutter. Is Jasz a Hindu? Wat type of clothes Humeira wear in ur story? U sud hv mentioned it in dis part😊.

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@A_bibliophile

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#302

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Glad dat u may be d 1st writer to show a girl elder than boy. Everyone sud understand dat its okay for even a girl to marry a younger guy. Even Jodha(by 22 days) n Salima(by 4-5 years) were elder than Jalal. I am fed up of always seeing a guy elder than girl by more than 3-4 yrs. I am happy wid u showing AyRa but plz don't make Humeira like Razia till d end. It vl be ridiculous to see Humeira listening everything to Ayaan as his gf n Ayaan ordering her around like a slave. Hope Humeira too becomes modern. Hope Zoya n Jasz dump Farhan in d gutter. Is Jasz a Hindu? Wat type of clothes Humeira wear in ur story? U sud hv mentioned it in dis part😊.

well ya dont worry zoya and jasz will make sure humeira doesnt remain like that well jasz is jasleen so she is a sikh and ya asya and kasz are same age and humeira is going to be elder COMMON ON ASYA AND KASZ WILL TURN 25 IN 2019 SO ITS FUTURE

Edited by ican - 11 years ago

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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

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Posted: 11 years ago

#303

Originally posted by: ican
well ya dont worry zoya and jasz will make sure humeira doesnt remain like that well jasz is jasleen so she is a sikh and ya asya and kasz are same age and humeira is going to be elder COMMON ON ASYA AND KASZ WILL TURN 25 IN 2019 SO ITS FUTURE

Wat does Humeira wear? Does she wear jeans short dresses or only salwar-kameez? Zoya even calls her by her name instead of baaji, aapi or di. I am not liking dis Zoya😊.

Dats wat I want to say. Wen u 1st mentioned their birth date wen they were born, many did not seemed to be happy wid Asad, Ayaan n Zoya of d same age n Humeira elder to them. I am fed up of seeing only Asad n Ayaan elder to Zoya n Humeira respectively in almost all d stories? Also, I am fed up to see dat in college stories, most of d time Asad is made senior of Zoya. I am glad u showed some realistic things. I am glad dat u r not showing Asad getn angry wid Zoya wearing jeans like its shown in more then 50% of stories n Zoya had to bang her head to explain him.

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 11 years ago

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@A_bibliophile

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#304

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Wat does Humeira wear? Does she wear jeans short dresses or only salwar-kameez? Zoya even calls her by her name instead of baaji, aapi or di. I am not liking dis Zoya😊.

Dats wat I want to say. Wen u 1st mentioned their birth date wen they were born, many did not seemed to be happy wid Asad, Ayaan n Zoya of d same age n Humeira elder to them. I am fed up of seeing only Asad n Ayaan elder to Zoya n Humeira respectively in almost all d stories? Also, I am fed up to see dat in college stories, most of d time Asad is made senior of Zoya. I am glad u showed some realistic things. I am glad dat u r not showing Asad getn angry wid Zoya wearing jeans like its shown in more then 50% of stories n Zoya had to bang her head to explain him.

well dear you must have seen zoya and humis conversation zoya did not either address her as Humeira or baji they just had normal conversation well she'll call humi aapi don't worry but humi does not like zoya much because zoya wants humi to BECOME A FEMINIST LIKE HER AND JASZ WHILE SHE IS MORE INFLUENCED BY HER MOM ya asad isnt going to be retrogressive zoya wears all dresses and humi wears indian but sometimes long skirts and slacks and ya asya kasz are of same age so they identify with each other because these four have to become best friends afterward

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Suri

@BlackJack.

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#305

here do you hear the song? now update on the same page.. and you wont need me to open your account...

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Suri

@BlackJack.

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#306

Chapter 4 a and b

Both parts very good. Dilshad finally married to Rashid and having kids Asad and Ayan and here Sid and Razia/zanab have zoya and humera.

the best part where Zainab tells them to attach Farooqi with Zoya's name. It so suits her.

Yeah you were right these parts were more clear. Nice work.

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DancingBell

@DancingBell

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#307

I am reading this story for the 1st time...And I loved it...Awesome work... 👏 ..Keep it up...,Pm me the next part n pls contiue soon...

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#308

Love ur story so different

Thanks for the buddy request and for the pm

Wow look at how times were different and the changes tht took place

Glad rashid figured out dilshad attempt and they got married

Wow they have worked hard and it had payed off an island and hospitals

Each of them live in their own house

Gaffur got his two wife he just couldn't have one 😃

He wanted a challenge and zainab was

Can't believe razia is quiet and timid 😆

So humera is older to zoya

Zoya always a piece of work love how she tricked humi

She has to get what she wants first then anyone after

Can't wait for when asya will meet

Loved the way u will have asad portrayed

Hum tum this will be fun

Continue soon

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#309

Okay !! So we got Zoya's character here!!

She is a feminist and trying to challenge the society!!

I like her motives but she is kind of rude!

The way she treated with humaira just to fulfill her wish it was not to nice...

anyways this makes that she has problems and which will be better eventually!!

Wonder what will she do to Asad???

Nice update!!

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@A_bibliophile

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#310

Originally posted by: anopama
Love ur story so different
Thanks for the buddy request and for the pm
Wow look at how times were different and the changes tht took place
Glad rashid figured out dilshad attempt and they got married
Wow they have worked hard and it had payed off an island and hospitals
Each of them live in their own house
Gaffur got his two wife he just couldn't have one😃
He wanted a challenge and zainab was
Can't believe razia is quiet and timid😆
So humera is older to zoya
Zoya always a piece of work love how she tricked humi
She has to get what she wants first then anyone after
Can't wait for when asya will meet
Loved the way u will have asad portrayed
Hum tum this will be fun
Continue soon

thanks so much it was such a awesome comment thanks loved it and well i guess you liked the hum tum links thanks keep reading, liking and recommending my ff thanks