AsYa(kabhi) FF:It Takes Two To A Tango THREAD 2 ASYA BEGIN

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princess101

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Posted: 11 years ago

#271

Loving it its a awesome story thanx for the pm and update soon

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@A_bibliophile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: princess101
Loving it its a awesome story thanx for the pm and update soon

thanks so much for your comments do read the HUM TUM LINK THANKS KEEP READING, LIKING AND RECOMMENDING THE FF T THANKS

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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

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Posted: 11 years ago

#273

Hey dear, I vl come again to comment.

Wats ur name?

Awesome Update👏😊

I am happy wid d way u made Zoya as a little bitchy type

I am fed up of seeing her mahaan

R u going to pair Humeira wid Ayaan?

Age difference is okay.

If d guy can be elder than girl then y it can't be d vice-versa?

There r many serials in which girls r elder than boys

Zoya accidentally married Ayaan in d show n she was elder than him.

Humeira elder is okay but it vl be weird to see her being docile to Ayaan.

I want Jas to be paired wid Ayaan n they r of d same age.

R u planning to make Ayaan as MCP for a change?

Do update soon n PM me😃

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unisha

@unishaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#274

awesome.. Loving it.. Really interesting n different.. Continue soon.. Thanks for pm..

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Chahat Doshi

@Chahat_A_Doshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#275

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OMG the Hum Tum Comic Strip

Nice update

I could not see the pics in update 5b I don't know showed some error but going by the comments pics must be beautiful

Thank you for the pm

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Suganti Kularaju

@suganti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#276

interesting story

love zoya's character here

pls continue soon and thanks for the pm

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Suri

@BlackJack.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#277

Hi Suri here... may i know your name plz?

i'll be giving in my comments chapter wise as i get time to read them..hope its fine.

Chapter 1

So it starts back in time with Rashid... i havent read any such stuff before. Good for a change.

the main thing in this chapter was 'The Old Times' and the traditions ruling that era. well some of them still exist, and hopelessly, arent being worked upon. the way men refrained to give women their space and the right to education still saddens. then the thing you mentioned about women being imprisoned in the thoughts men possess. i like how you reflected that time and the circumstances in your words.

Chapter 2

Oh well polygamy has not much been prevalent in the dominating class of Pakistan. what is Sid's mother's name by the way?

its a typical situation where wives cant accept the others and the Shohar is screwed up between them.

well personally this concept of multiple marriages is really disturbing for me... do you plan to continue exposing this concept through your work? because it takes two to tango not three four...kidding!