SaHil One Shot: Hoping for Something More - Page 3

I love you.


I want...I NEED more.


You have to give me more.


There isn't that many to begin with. You have to contribute more. Loads more.


Our OTP needs a forum full of stories.




And thank you Mah darling!


Not only are you talented *super talented!!!* you're so very thoughtful! And so very very talented! And and and...Hee!


I'm pretty sure you've edited out the errors you spoke of...coz I see none! Hmmm..either that...or I was way too immersed in the story to realise??!!!



I love this.



They're freezing cold and all I feel is the heat!



How. Is. That. Even. Possible!



Did I tell you you're really talented? I did? Well what's another time?


Mwah mwah mwah...


He told her his past. And she knows enough to know that he's not comfortable sharing (and reliving) that past...and she told him not to...I'm glad he did anyway.


Oh goodness.



All those clutching. And she touched his cheek!!!!!!


Hayye!!!



You're amazing you know that.



What an amazingly well thought out story!


Am already eagerly looking forward to your next work. You're working on something right?!


:)

Hey Suds welcome back 😃.

read it again yesterday...still felt awesome...read it again tiz morning still feeling awesome...love sahil locked up n sharing body heat 😳 ...if thr is a double triple like button...i wud had hit it...write more dear.. u deffo hav the flair... 👏 ...m goin to sahil dreamland

Loved it!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

Lol. Don't know about you deserving a long-ish comment or not.😆

But..i have this "thing" you know? I get carried away, when i read an awesome shit like this, and let my feelings, emotions to just..flow...😆 Yes, its true. Ask the maniacs over here, or anybody. 🤣

Well, you would see these kinda comments of mine, around here much😆

The convo on hat freezer thing. Ahh yes. Inspiration knows no bounds. 😆

The piece was really gorgeous!

Originally posted by: TVD-IANcrazy

"Shitty writer'...Is there any redefinition of 'shitty' I am not aware of??? 😆 😆 I mean seriously. You've got to be kidding me. This was an amazing piece of writing. I loved it. Do write more on SaAhil.

You know the second I read they are locked up in a freezer I was like how come they end up there??? But your last line about not asking you 'how' question really cracked me up. 😆

Do continue soon.

Originally posted by: nikki.171

Why do all good writers think they're shitty? Girl (Uhmm.. OR boy? Boys usually arent so romantic writers? No offense to any boy present, if you do get offended of course) you are a great writer! I admit I was awfully curious about how they ended up there but I had just watched another show where the leads get stuck in a cold storage and I conjured up that scenario in my head.
Even then, leading on from there I loved how you linked the past with the present and how with the idea of distracting her, he got distracted with his own flow of emotions. His explanation "I was bad' and futile attempt at humour. Her offering him her comfort in her own way... 'I trust you too' and then the stroke. Just melted the fan girl in me. Mr. Ahil. Dont you worry, Sanam will remember everything. Stepping out from the room, things will take a new turn for SaHil.. Assuming Billi doesnt walk in? 😆
You ARE going to continue it wont you? I know its supposed to be an OS and everything. But you WILL continue it, wont you? WONT YOU? Say Yes!

P.S Gul does know how to draw us in no? I had no expectations from the leap but look where it brought me!