SaHil One Shot: Hoping for Something More - Page 2

Originally posted by: Aishah8

Thanks for writing a sahil os thecuddling was cute!

Thanks for commenting love <3
I love cuddles <3 🤣

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

Omg! This piece is so good man. Super stuff there!

Purely brilliant. I loved each and every bit of it.

You write so damn well!!

"body heat sharing" Yes they need that.😆

I am not curious about how did they end up there. It was just excellent.

The cuddling was so adorable. Aahil sharing his past with the girl with an S.😆Trying to distract her. And the position that they sat in.😆

It was chilling to know about that torture.

Great piece man. You should write more. Like for real!😛

:O
I don't think I deserve such a long comment 🤣
Stahp bluffing bruh- it can't be that good 🤣

Man, I was actually having a conversation with my teacher about what would happen if we were locked in a freezer with a really hot dude- that's how I came up with this 🤣

Ah the torture.
I dunno what happened there srsly.

Thanks so much for leaving such a generous comment love <3

Originally posted by: arshi_luver

I don't know how you call yourself a shitty writer..this was beautiful! Yes proofreading would have made it a better edit but who cares it was so good the way it was. I also just finished writing my first OS on india forums and it's on SAHIL check it out! it's called In His Arms. But warning: It does not beat your work..may seem boring lol!

Keep writing on SaHil!😉

Really?
Thanks man!
Yeah, know that I think about it, I should of re read it before posting.
But I hate proof reading 🤣

YOUR OS IS BEAUTIFUL LOVE YOU WROTE THE DIALOGUES IN HINDI!!!
I don't even speak Hindi 🤣

Naw- yours was better, all that sexual tension made me drool <33

Originally posted by: FaultInMyStars

It was awesome! Love love love it.
Write some more please. 😳

Aww thanks love <3
Maybe, I might. One day. 🤣

Your username.
Is it what I think it is?
iS IT???

Originally posted by: suds.

:O
I don't think I deserve such a long comment 🤣
Stahp bluffing bruh- it can't be that good 🤣

Man, I was actually having a conversation with my teacher about what would happen if we were locked in a freezer with a really hot dude- that's how I came up with this 🤣

Ah the torture.
I dunno what happened there srsly.

Thanks so much for leaving such a generous comment love <3

"Shitty writer'...Is there any redefinition of 'shitty' I am not aware of??? 😆 😆 I mean seriously. You've got to be kidding me. This was an amazing piece of writing. I loved it. Do write more on SaAhil.

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

Lol. Don't know about you deserving a long-ish comment or not.😆

But..i have this "thing" you know? I get carried away, when i read an awesome shit like this, and let my feelings, emotions to just..flow...😆 Yes, its true. Ask the maniacs over here, or anybody. 🤣

Well, you would see these kinda comments of mine, around here much😆

The convo on hat freezer thing. Ahh yes. Inspiration knows no bounds. 😆

The piece was really gorgeous!

Why do all good writers think they're shitty? Girl (Uhmm.. OR boy? Boys usually arent so romantic writers? No offense to any boy present, if you do get offended of course) you are a great writer! I admit I was awfully curious about how they ended up there but I had just watched another show where the leads get stuck in a cold storage and I conjured up that scenario in my head.
Even then, leading on from there I loved how you linked the past with the present and how with the idea of distracting her, he got distracted with his own flow of emotions. His explanation "I was bad' and futile attempt at humour. Her offering him her comfort in her own way... 'I trust you too' and then the stroke. Just melted the fan girl in me. Mr. Ahil. Dont you worry, Sanam will remember everything. Stepping out from the room, things will take a new turn for SaHil.. Assuming Billi doesnt walk in? 😆
You ARE going to continue it wont you? I know its supposed to be an OS and everything. But you WILL continue it, wont you? WONT YOU? Say Yes!

P.S Gul does know how to draw us in no? I had no expectations from the leap but look where it brought me!

you wrote it beautifully...the emotions,cuddling is very nice..i want this type of scene in show..sahil are best pair..do write...

AWWW THIS IS MADDD CUTTTEEE!👏 LOOOVVVEEE IT! PLEEAASSSEEE do write more on ma SaHil!