SaHil One Shot: Hoping for Something More

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@saruu.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Gayu-Sahil
you wrote it beautifully...the emotions,cuddling is very nice..i want this type of scene in show..sahil are best pair..do write...

thanks love, im probably gonna write more stuff on these two soon <3

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@saruu.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: zzinia2411
AWWW THIS IS MADDD CUTTTEEE!👏 LOOOVVVEEE IT! PLEEAASSSEEE do write more on ma SaHil!

THAANK YOU LOVE <3333

i will- i have thought of some things to write about

thanks for the adorable comment love <3

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@saruu.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: risingsea101
Awesome OS babe
It was great and I really enjoyed reading it
Keep up the good work and seriously keep writing 😳
Thanks for the PM :))

thanks love <33

yeah, i am going to, have a few ideas lined up :)

thats fine <3

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@saruu.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: farz_parachute
I love you.

I want...I NEED more.

You have to give me more.

There isn't that many to begin with. You have to contribute more. Loads more.

Our OTP needs a forum full of stories.

And thank you Mah darling!

Not only are you talented *super talented!!!* you're so very thoughtful! And so very very talented! And and and...Hee!

I'm pretty sure you've edited out the errors you spoke of...coz I see none! Hmmm..either that...or I was way too immersed in the story to realise??!!!

I love this.

They're freezing cold and all I feel is the heat!

How. Is. That. Even. Possible!

Did I tell you you're really talented? I did? Well what's another time?

Mwah mwah mwah...

He told her his past. And she knows enough to know that he's not comfortable sharing (and reliving) that past...and she told him not to...I'm glad he did anyway.

Oh goodness.

All those clutching. And she touched his cheek!!!!!!

Hayye!!!

You're amazing you know that.

What an amazingly well thought out story!

Am already eagerly looking forward to your next work. You're working on something right?!

:)

I LOVE YOU TOO.

aww thank you so much- you dont know how much this means to me <33

yeah, i can agree with that.

this otp has so many possibilities and au's that could be written on them.. oh my goodness why people writing more?!

what can i say, i love feelings <3 🤣

and physical contact that doesn't end up straight to sexy times and means something more.

THANK YOU SO SO SO MUCH LOVE <33

yeah, i am, im gonna go straight to it after my daily adventure through IF <3

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@saruu.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Paint.It.BlacK.
This One Shot is amazing!👏
Soo beautifully you had pictured the whole scene--including Aahil's concealed concern...and sanam's trust on him--its simply brilliant!❤️ 👏

the emotions are so beautifully portrayed..! You are a gifted writer dear!⭐️ keep it up and please keep writing more on Saahil..🤗

THAT. IS. DEAN. WINCHESTERS. FACE.

sorry, i got a lil off topic. i have his face too.

aww thank so much love <3

really?

i dont think i am 🤣

sure will!

thanks for the comment love <3

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@saruu.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: -Hurya-

thanks love <33

i wish i knew how to post stuff like that- my life would be complete 🤣

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@saruu.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: ...Maha-Srk...
Super
Just amazing
wonderful Os.

thanks love <3

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@saruu.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa
Hey Suds welcome back 😃.

This is the first Sahil story I am reading and I liked it 😊.

The way you explained their expressions and their dialogues definitely felt like sahil.

I will admit I tried picturizing asya here but it was a little difficult. Very well written 👏

thanks <3

aw really? i hope i didn't make you run off from the couple or anything 🤣

OMG I DO THAT TOO!!

if i dont know or like the pairing but i like the story i always try and use my otp in place of them.

glad to know im not the only one 🤣

thanks for the comment love <3

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@saruu.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: diana72
read it again yesterday...still felt awesome...read it again tiz morning still feeling awesome...love sahil locked up n sharing body heat 😳 ...if thr is a double triple like button...i wud had hit it...write more dear.. u deffo hav the flair... 👏 ...m goin to sahil dreamland

AWWW LOVE, IM MELTING <3333

Thanks so much for the adorable comment love <33

yeah, i am gonna write more :)

i love you <33