The Poetic Drabble Collection#LATEST -'The Sinking Ship' page 14 :) - Page 6

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Beautiful! ❤️

Originally posted by: -Maliha-

i so loved it Saima D,..
TFPm,..

these lines were ❤️

You left me
That is true
I left you
That too, is true

and these were touching n moving

A drop of dew
A drop too few
A mighty might
A feeble fight
Lonely nights
Tears of plight
Trembling hearts
Shatter apart
Life's a moment
But it's now all white
Come one night
Came one knight

keep writing,.. and making people love yah,..😳

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

u n farz rock saima Di!!!
i am not much into poetry but i enjoyed reading it n tried to understand it...

Originally posted by: raneeb

Poignant Saima

Dreams are meant to be lived happily otherwise it was just a bad dream! Treat it like that!

I just spent last week with two of our widowed friends--both the husbands were fighter pilots and we were all together in the squadron which is like one big family- our home away from home!
Overnight all their dreams turned sour due to the evil hands of fate-Air Crashes while training. RIP. One passed away in 1984 when the wife was just 25 yrs old with two children - one 3 yrs and the other 11 months old. The other lost her husband in 1987 and was left with again two children who were a little older but both families were overnight removed from our safe haven to fight the big bad world. The children are now grown up, married and well settled --a real support for their lovely Mothers who fought all the odds to bring them up to be lovely human beings! But the two lovely ladies have not moved on themselves...they are still living in that idyllic dream they had spun many years ago. As a result they are lonely and what they lack is companionship. I had to be very firm and tell the younger one who is exactly a decade younger than me to the day to not block her mind to accepting someone to share all the little pleasures that life throws up! (Sadly the elder one has cancer hence we had the get together!)

So Saima dear you must move on too because dreams are meant to be lived... too soon for you but keep an open mind...things can only get better! and little Zainab is there to delight you at every phase ---till she flies away! because only if you let them fly do they come back!

Love you and hugs...

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

very nice poem..👍🏼

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

beautiful wrk dee..

Originally posted by: p_s05

"They say because of me there is love
I say because of love there is you
Who knew my killer would be my love
And my love was you"

"Your heart lives on

When mine is freed for sure"

@ The Dynamic Duo "A Dream" was splendid! ⭐️

Thanks for the PM! 😃

Originally posted by: chicksoup

👏 Good job, Dynamic Duo!

Seemed to shift between hope and despair...💔

🤗

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

beautifully written...

luv it...

thx fr the pm...