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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: suds.
duDES THIS MADE ME TEAR UP.

A sinking ship, he says.
The Titanic.

A story of love, I countered.
Titanic.

ASSFDFJKG WHAT ARE YOU'S EVEN THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL I CANT.

The ship that fell deep in sorrow, he continues.

Brought together the souls of tomorrow, I ended.

WHAT IS THIS?????

I. AM. WEEPING.

MY HEART.

T-T

You know you're really a sweetheart?

Yes you are!

YOU HAVE FAVOURITE PARTS!

Well I assumed they are!

Awww cammere you! *hugs real tight*

There there!

Everything's fine!

LoveYouDippu!!!!

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fifi1297

@fifi1297

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Aww!! Mwah mwah!!

Thank you!!

I love your comment!
Beautifully written?
Wonderful work?

Hayye!!!

:)

My pleasure🤗

It was beautifully written...

nd it was wonderful work also...😊

Do write more...

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: nilusoni
nice
thanx for pm

Thanks for reading!!

Mwah!!

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Oh Farru!! I am so sorry!! I read it, yes. But I don't know, I was not logged in that time, and then when I logged in I forgot to comment :(

I am so sorry #4. You know I feel really really bad, when I forget to read YOUR works! Trust me.

This was just beyond excellence! YES, I say this for all your works, COZ THATS WHAT THEY ARE!! :D

Oh yes, The Dynamic Duo you guys are! You are such class writers, you guys should collab and publish a book! ⭐️

Don't forget to acknowledge us maniacs😆

Super awesome this is! So very elegant, graceful. :)

The Sinking Ship, found its anchor, with you guys :)

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TVD-IANcrazy

@TVD-IANcrazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

unres mine on page 15. I know it's late for that but still.

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: TVD-IANcrazy
unres mine on page 15. I know it's late for that but still.

Aaloo.

You're the cute one!!!

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#137

Responding 19 days later, to the PM. #LifeGetsInTheWay

"The Sinking Ship"

*sigh*

Grasping at hope, seeking it's anchor.

"A sinking ship, he says.
The Titanic.

A story of love, I countered.
Titanic.

A story of hope,
Of life
Of dreams.

You live in a dreamland, he accuses.

Illusionary..

But I'm real, I defended.

Aspirant

Idealist.
Optimist.

You are real, he smiles.
You're a dream too.

Who's? I whispered.

Well mine, who else?

Over the oceans we glide
Through the winds and above the tide

As free as he was
I was to be too

The ship that fell deep in sorrow, he continues.

Brought together the souls of tomorrow, I ended.

I saw a bird
Flying my way.

And this time
This time, I braved."

Wonderful!

Edited by p_s05 - 11 years ago

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Saima Syed

@Saima-Syed

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Posted: 11 years ago

#138

A big heart felt thank you to every one who took out time to read and appreciate our Drabble

It really means a lot to both Einstein and I

Apologies on my part as I have not been able to respond to to you individually as well as Einstein

Hopefully Insha'Allah we will be coming back with another one soon

Lots of Love to you all

Saima

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