The Poetic Drabble Collection#LATEST -'The Sinking Ship' page 14 :) - Page 8

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

Thank you so much Api, for sharing that and for your kind words.

ChocoBerry sent me something so true and very beautiful

A message that said

'When I'm worried, it's usually because I'm trying to do everything myself. When I am at peace, it's usually because I remember that God is in control'

I think we should all have more faith and leave things in a His hands, he is the best planner of all

Lots of love to you

Just everything is WRITTEN ... and all incarnations of Allah say the same--he has given each one of us enough strength to handle all these pressures and come out stronger... imagine the rainbow ...!!!!!!

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Awww!! Hugs right back atcha!!

Thank you so much mah darling!

You rock!

So...wanna share with us your take on the piece?

Your thoughts on it...and please no one is horribble at poetry...some are just better reader! Hehe!

Like you! So glad that you think it's amazing!

So now share!!

And do you have a favourite part??

Thant maybe touched you the most? Or meant something the most? Or anything!

Mwah mwah!!

Totally!!!😃

Warning ya, my words r probably really boring!!!🤣

The Dream poem I can relate to!!!👍🏼

😎Specially these lines,

Is this my life
That is now foreign

How life has become so unbearable
From simple lives to complex lies

How do we go back
When life's all damage

It reminds me of some things that I faced in the past!!!😊

However it also reminds me from these lines!!!⭐️

Rebuild what is precious
Rebuild what is pure

That it wasn't the end and how I got out from those things and rebuilding my normal life!!!😳

Warned ya, sorry for wasting ur time!!!😆

Really the poem was lovely!!!❤️

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

Thank you so much

Am glad u liked it

Best wishes

Liked it... I loved it!!!😃

I've unres-ed after a thou-sanddd yearsss, and I won't make you wait another thou-sanddd moreee.

Lovely!! Thanks farz and saima di!!

You girls are such awesome writers man! This was pure perfection.

That was very very beautiful Farz and Saima.

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

You girls are such awesome writers man! This was pure perfection.

It's Just so beautiful. Elegant. Gorgeous. Serene. Divine.❤️

Yo "Writer-Sisters" you both are!

I am.gonna give an affidavit to both of you for changing your name.😆

This was just beyond words. Loved itvto the bits.

Do write more. Don't ever think of stopping it.😃

Originally posted by: GitaIyer

That was very very beautiful Farz and Saima.

Individually you both are brilliant, together just beyond brilliant.