The Poetic Drabble Collection#LATEST -'The Sinking Ship' page 14 :)

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Salam and heyya all you beautiful people!


I see I've caught your interest...



Wait.



What?


I didn't?



But I did get you to open this up and read.


Hehe.




Dear all, the newly dubbed dynamic duo *so what if I made that up this very instant* aka Saima Syed and Farz Nanhi Munni Rahi *hehe* is officially an item!


Say what???!!!



Move aside broken hearts, Dynamic Duo is proud to present a one of a kind, never before heard of *uh, maybe?* the ever special, the ever cool *uhhh* thread, known as The Poetic Drabble Collection! By SaiFar *uh I promise we'll come up with a better name*


Yep, you heard, er read right!


A collection!



Which means there's more than one piece of drabble- every bit poetic *we'd like to think it is*

Means you have to put on your best Shakespeare hat and read it! Yes!

You simply MUST read it! Read them!

Why? Well. Um.

I don't know yet why. Maybe YOU should tell us why?

Yes this comes with a warning.

It's sad. Heartbreaking. Confusing. Boring. Some of you might at some point find it skippable even.


What??


You already do?


Don't! Don't skip just yet!!!



'Coz.


Uh. Tak kenal maka tak cinta.


Huh. THAT caught your interest didn't it?



Anyway, it would mean so very much to us if you'd all give it a try! If you think it's decent please do show! If you think it's utter rubbish. Don't bother. You wouldn't be reading this if you did. Yeah. So much confidence eh. Hehe. It's all in the head. Life's a mind game.

And our minds are not just ours alone are they?


Come with us on a journey of midnight ramblings *okay, evening and midnight, damn time difference* where two souls unite and delve into the line after normal. Into a life that is surreal.

Since this thread is really an introductory one...and for index to any past (just one) and future PDs...I give you in this thread...a little surprise. *It's quite massive actually*


By Dazzling Diva and Sidekick Sweetheart!
*yes yes name is temporary, or is it? and coz I am a sweetheart*



Enjoy!




*scroll down...*

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Index

A Dream - Page 1

The Sinking Ship - Page 14
Edited by Saima-Syed - 11 years ago
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A Dream


Is this my dream
That was once serene


Is this my life
That is now foreign


You left me
That is true
I left you
That too, is true


A pillar of support
A pillar of strength


It was supposed to be simple
But how did it end


One to love
One to trust


One to honour
One way or another


How I want your hold
When we're finally told


That this is an end
That this is our end


When days are long
When days are hard


Across the field
Across the yard


Every passing hour
Makes its mark


Every passing moment
Feels its spark


Live it like it's a dream
Live it
Like it
For it is, a dream

Live it like you're Queen
Live it
Like it
For you are, a Queen


It was supposed to be simple
But how did it end.


My life was never an example
Even back then


My life was simple
Then why must it end


All of life's power
All of that we measure


All of our heart's desire
But have we ever, treasure


They say because of me there is love
I say because of love there is you
Who knew my killer would be my love
And my love was you


How life has become so unbearable
From simple lives to complex lies


How can one turn from the truth
From easy prey to toughened cries


A drop of dew
A drop too few


A mighty might
A feeble fight


Lonely nights
Tears of plight


Trembling hearts
Shatter apart


Life's a moment
But it's now all white


Come one night
Came one knight


Eyes a glimmer
But no longer a dreamer


With colours gone
And souls all worn


How do we pick
How do we salvage


How do we go back
When life's all damage


When hope is lost
When faith adrift


Finding that one glimmer
Is all that we need


Rebuild what is precious
Rebuild what is pure


Your heart lives on
When mine is freed for sure


It was supposed to be simple
And it really was just that


It was supposed to be simple
And now it is dead



Thanks for reading!
Lots of Love

⭐️ SaiFar
Edited by Saima-Syed - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome poem Sam Di. 😉
Ur work with Farz is just awesome 😃
and mostly the poems 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

Awesome poem Sam Di. 😉

Ur work with Farz is just awesome 😃
and mostly the poems 😆


Hey Sunny

Thank u so much

Hope u r well, how did your exam go that day?
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Originally posted by: Saima-Syed



Hey Sunny

Thank u so much

Hope u r well, how did your exam go that day?


hola sam di.
Welcome di. I am well n hope u r also well.
Yeah exam gone well and now exams are finished tomorrow only.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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MINE.
*Edit*

1. Sorry for the superlate un-res.

2. This:

Before I get into the poem, I would like to say DAMN GURLS. You guys can really write. Like I had to look away for a second after I was done reading to normalize the tension in the air. Had me from the start, and it just built without a drop ANYWHERE along the poem. You guys got the tone JUST right, it was beautiful. I loved it, and you guys are amazing <3

It was kind of like a slightly more youthful & less gory and "we're all gonna be killed" version of Edgar Allen Poe. And I love that dude (even though he's a psycho).



(He's my psycho <3)

This poem was such A Dream, it made me want to go get ice cream. <--And this is why I'm not a poet. Excuse my pathetic attempts at humor and "poetry."

The particulars:
-Loved the metaphoric "circle" in stanza 21.
-The motif and what I found to be one of the themes, simplicity of life and the inevitable end, kept bringing the reader back when he'd drifted just enough off the shore of the poem.
-Lines that particularly stayed with me when I was done reading were:


"It was supposed to be simple
But how did it end.


My life was never an example
Even back then


My life was simple
Then why must it end "

It was supposed to be simple goes to--> it was simple. Was that disbelief, ignorance, or the rightful choice to be happy? Life was an individual concept, not meant to be an example. Even back then. But regardless, I love how to completed the "story" reminding us that it did end.

Fangirl Shweta: Gahhh I just loveddd it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Okie, I'm done. Sorry. Bye.


<333333333333333333

-Shwetz
Edited by -ShwSha- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--


hola sam di.
Welcome di. I am well n hope u r also well.
Yeah exam gone well and now exams are finished tomorrow only.


Is ka matlab party time lol
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It finally clicked

Mwah

Congratulations 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome poem saima di... 😳
Edited by yumna.imad - 11 years ago

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