The Poetic Drabble Collection#LATEST -'The Sinking Ship' page 14 :)

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farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: -ShwSha-
MINE.

All yours babe. All yours.

Now gimme. A comment.

Mwah!

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farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--
Awesome poem Sam Di. 😉
Ur work with Farz is just awesome 😃
and mostly the poems 😆

Thank you Sunny.

Mostly poems eh?

😉

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farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: yumna.imad
Awesome poem saima di... 😳

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

But it's a team effort written by both me and Einstein 😊

Aww sis. Always so thoughtful!

Mwah!

And thanks Yumna!

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farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Awesome poem
& congratulations to Farz to become dazzler.

Aww thank you! Am glad you think it's awesome!

Annddd THANK YOU! I'm a DAZZLER yo!

Mwahhh!

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farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: gowtu
Wow
Its just...
Just awesome...
Love u bthhh..
Loved dis drabble...

Hey farz Congo againnn

Aww thank you so very much dearest Gowtu! We love you too!!

And am so very happy that you love this drabble!!

Wanna share some thoughts on it?

Your interpretation?

Yeah?

Okay! Am waiting!

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farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Linsie
Rebuild what is precious
Rebuild what is pure ❤️

Aww Linsie!

This is hope right? Do you feel it?

Mwah!

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farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Linsie

Hugs Linsie!

And thank you so much!

So glad you love it!

Tell me more!! I wanna hear your thoughts on it!!

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farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa
Einstein, Sis this was just so beautiful. Every word oozes the pain of falling apart. Am in love with it.

Hope to read more soon.

Heyya Choco ICE!

Am so glad you're loving it! And thanks for sharing your thoughts on it. You felt the pain eh?

Thanks!

I wanna hear more!! Your take on piece!

*Einstein...*

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farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: aseelashah
Fantastic poem buddies
Its so touching
My heart also bleed by reading this
Sach mein i love it
Somewhere in my heart something broke😭
Some sad memories came alive
Thanks for pm
Keep writing

Hey there, thank you so much for such amazing response!

I'm really glad you got the poem! I know it's shattering, sorry if those sad memories troubled you!

Hugs!

Mwahh!