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Posted: 11 years ago
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Edited by Linsie - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Wow
simply superb..
I loved it to d core..
I enjoyed it..


Awesomly awesome prt..

Aaj dimag lagaana nai pada :p
lolll

seriously amzng prt it was..
Drunken zoya nd jealous asad

always treat to watch..

Dis updt was so cute..
So funny..
So adorable..
So intense..
So gud
so lvly nd specially so emotional one..

Asad got to knw another zoya zoya tdy..
Nd zoya...
Ohh myy.. Poor soul she went through so mch pain...

Asad is the only one who can handle her.. Specially in dis stage :p
i loved asad's cute cute expressions..

Totally totally loved it...

Aaahh ab subhaah kya hoga :/
poor asad :p :p
Edited by gowtu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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'what took u so long she said between sobs...
Don't u know i have been waiting for you ?
I was so scared.. So alone..
Y do u make me wait' !

Asad-i m sry...
I ddnt knw u were waiting..
Had i knw..
I would have come sooner..

Zoya-i have been waiting a long tym..
Avery long tym..
And i don't like being lonely..

Asad-i m sry..
I made u wait..

Dis was my fvrt prt nd i loved the lines..
Dis lines not only for the situation..
Its sumthng more..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was a lovely update.😃 really funny.
Oh my Zoya and her tantrums😛😛😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congratulations for the new thread.
Update was awesome. I really enjoyed reading Asad handling drunk Zoya. I hope Zoya will not create some issue next morning.

Please update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Res 😆
Oh my god another update !!! 😲😆
That was awesome ... Detailed comment soon...

Unres
Hehehee poor Asad is holding on to his building temper.. he is shocked to see her still drinking laying on his shoulder...😆
Hahahaha she so in her dreamland hearing him call her Zoya... OH MY GOD!!! she is crazy she is flashing?? Asad must be going crazy seeing all this...😆
Poor Zoya slowly let him know of her mom and her fears..😊.👏 He is turning soft to her..
Trying to get this dress off of me...I am hot...and I need to take off my bra...I cant stand being in a bra for long...it bothers me..My gals need some air to breathe... Too much information Ms Farooqi, please keep it to yourself... hahahahaaa Asad is in big trouble now...🤣☺️
Asad was beyond repair now, her image was embedded in his eyes.It took extreme amounts of self control for Asad to contain his thoughts. This was not happening.NO this couldn't happen...Why the hell was this happening... no words hehehee🤣😳
she is full on flirting with him... poor guy controlling so many things not only his anger😆..
them having dinner.. and Asad getting to know all about her likes and dislikes seems like an unintentional dinner date..😳😊
she flirting like never before.. wonder how she would react when she remembers all this after coming back to sense..😆
What Mr khan..you have a killer body...I mean those abs...those pecks...the path to yout happy trail... WOW...I bet you are good in bed...she smiled.. hahahahaahaaa you surely get a chance to confirm that later in future Zoya..😆🤣
awww he forgot that he had to find being lost in thoughts... oh no. she feels the situation similar to her previous nightmare and is getting scared... 😲
What took you so long she said between sobs...Don't you know I've been waiting for you??? I was so scared, so alone...why did you make me wait...
I am sorry...I didn't know you were waiting..Had I know I would have come sooner...her tried pacifyin her...caresseing her head and trying to calm her down... These lines make me feel its not just about the game.. but also for the delay in coming into each other's life😳😃.. or am I reading too much into the line..😕
they are so cute..
So now that we have a lead, can I say that the next update is gonna be blasting ...👏😃

beautifully scripted.. the fun and flirty part was good, but you also showed her reasons for adapting the 'bad girl avatar' really well...👏
Edited by divram - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I had my teeth out all the time while reading it 😆😆

i enjoyed the chapter thoroughly!!!

i wonder how is Zoya going to react when she actually sees herself in Asad's clothes in the morning 😉

though it was a chapter full of fun, i loved the realizations that Asad had!!!

He saw a new Zoya Farooqui, a completely different one whom he had been seeing all this while...
Zoya's fear and her lost faith in love was very beautifully written and expressed... 👏

and the text at the end!!!! Aaah!!! another new thing for me to think on!!! 😉😉

lovely update...

and now, i guess i will be going to your previous thread to make it reach up to 120 pages 😉😆
Edited by BeYourself - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
congrats on new thread!!!
awesome update :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😳Congratulations for the new thread 😊😊
Drunk zoya was hilarious😆 blowing away asad's mind 😃
A superb read 😊
Loved that it was focused only on asad-zoya 😳 (Was much needed😉😳)
Thank you for updating before getting desired likes/comments
And thanks for pm too

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