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fanraya

@fanraya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Wow, this is incredible,🤗 loved it so much, funny and emotional, touched my heart.. Beautiful from start to end, I did not want it to end.. You are doing an awesome job, and I am in love with your Asya.. lovely story.. Feel for Zoe.. Poor Asad, 😆 I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter, eager to see Zoe's reaction next day.. OMG just can not imagine what she will do when she will know what she did the day before.. 😆 Please update soon, I can not wait..😳 by the way form me you have 30 likes.. may be more..

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Javeria

@Surbhiholic55

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Awesome update.
Drunk zoya is so funny 😆
Loved the last part the most. AsYa hug and Asad kissed zoya 😳
continue soon.
Congrats for new thread 😃

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

congrats for new thread

amazing part

thanx for pm

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vinita459

@vinita459

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Hey there, sorry for commenting after so many days. I finally finished reading all the chapter. The story is becoming interesting with each chapter. The last one is the best. I love drunk Zoya. You wrote it wonderfully. I loved the emotional part where she talks about her mom. That scene was quite touching. Asad is echoing lot of patience. Loved the last paragraph. Eagerly waiting to read more :)