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TaiLung

@TaiLung

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

😭 loved it

buts its so painful

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Emaani.95

@Emaani.95

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

WoW!

Awesome update Keerthy :)

You really did an awesome job! 👍🏼

I loved it!

"There, inside the crib was a little creature.
It's beautiful eyes were wet as hot tears streamed down those rosy little cheeks. But the moment it saw him it stopped crying and it's eyes went wide. A little smile graced it's tiny pouty lips. It's eyes which were brimming with tears were now filled with wonder and joy."

This was the most adorable segment of the update! I could clearly imagine the baby and felt like holding her in my arms. Such a cutie pie she is!<3

"Reality hit him. It hit him hard as though hit by a lightning bolt. He realized that the owner of those mesmerizing eyes were not Zoya.
They belonged to their daughter Zara.
Her Zara!"

Then came this amazingly written segment. I have no words for this. I had tears in my eyes when I read both of these segments which is a evidence of how good writer you are.

Lovely 👏

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Suri

@BlackJack.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

OMG that stung😭 nicely done!👏

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

part 1.
Beautifully written!!
Oh God Zoya is no more!!!

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

part 2.
Zaara became asad's light!!!
Loved it!!

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Maddss

@Maddss

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Kiki u did it againn!!👏

wen i heard tat u came wit 2nd part i didn't get tat really,,,d stry already finished,,,,wat in d @nd part????

but u jst simply stated tat life is never meaningless...we shld jst open

our eyes to see d light nd recgnze itt!!thre r also others who is also wrthy of our love

i jst loved it...every wrd of it..,,,

well ofcourse the core reason for me to come here never been disappointing!!!

as always i loved it,,,nd got another reason to hate xams nd other wrk,,,,tat kept me away frm reading ths for longgg

hatoff👍🏼

Edited by Maddss - 11 years ago

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: parakshi
Yea I am first one to like, comment on the last update
Thanx for the pm kiku
lovely os
emotional asad +zara and ishaan's masti =fabulous os!
keep writing

Thanks 😊

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: p_s05
Thanks for the PM, much appreciated! 😃

The second part was simply beautiful. ⭐️

Great job, on Asad's portrayal and his relationship with Zara. 👏

Thanks 😊