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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Meself
I'm coming back to it choti!!😊

come back soon di !!
your chotti is waiting for you !😛

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Ani

@DesiiiiGirllll

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Kiki!!!🤗
Pakdi gai😆🤣
SanDhir wala same OS😆
Very very emotional!❤️
Well a kuch kuch hota hai scene AGAIN😆🤣
Yet do baar edit karna bhi badi baat hoti hai😆
Love your concept❤️
After all meri fav movie😆

Luv Ani❤️

Edited by aniiee - 11 years ago

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: aniiee
Kiki!!!🤗
Pakdi gai😆🤣
SanDhir wala same OS😆
Very very emotional!❤️
Well a kuch kuch hota hai scene AGAIN😆🤣
Yet do baar edit karna bhi badi baat hoti hai😆
Love your concept❤️
After all meri fav movie😆

Luv Ani❤️

hehehehe!!😆
i never expected to read both of them !!
what can i do when i have friends in SH forum and are not interested in reading asya !
so i made a sandhir version too !!😆
i wrote in the pm that both are same !!
yes ! editing two times is hell of a job !!😕
thanku for reading both di !!
it means alot to me !
that was so sweet !
love you alot :)

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Emaani.95

@Emaani.95

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

This was truly a master piece!

Your writing skills are so much polished. Amazing! 👏

I loved how you wrote the end BUT I didn't like the end :(

Poor Asad! Just the thought of 'How he must have felt at that moment' makes me shudder.

Such a sad OS this was but beautifully written 😊

Do write more Keerthi 👍🏼

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Emaani.95
This was truly a master piece!
Your writing skills are so much polished. Amazing! 👏
I loved how you wrote the end BUT I didn't like the end :(
Poor Asad! Just the thought of 'How he must have felt at that moment' makes me shudder.
Such a sad OS this was but beautifully written 😊
Do write more Keerthi 👍🏼

i was so looking forward to read your comment !!!
thanku thanku thanku a lot for taking out time and reading my little OS !!!
my writing style is polished !!!! 😲 really !!!
that's surprising !!!
you love the end but you don't like it !!
now that's funny!😆😆
don't worry dear ! that's not the end !
there's a second part too !!!
i'll try to post it soon if i finish my pending school works soon !
and i seriously have alot of them !
i love you sooo sooo much for this !!
love you dear !🤗
keerthy with a "Y" 😆 :)

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Emaani.95

@Emaani.95

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-

i was so looking forward to read your comment !!!
thanku thanku thanku a lot for taking out time and reading my little OS !!!
my writing style is polished !!!! 😲 really !!!
that's surprising !!!
you love the end but you don't like it !!
now that's funny!😆😆
don't worry dear ! that's not the end !
there's a second part too !!!
i'll try to post it soon if i finish my pending school works soon !
and i seriously have alot of them !
i love you sooo sooo much for this !!
love you dear !🤗
keerthy with a "Y" 😆 :)

Awww .. You're truly a SWEETHEART!<3

A bigg hugie for you 🤗

Hahahaha .. I meant to say that I didn't like the ending as Zoya dies in the end but the way you penned it down was great! 👍🏼 Ab samjhi? :P

What? Another part to an One-Shot??? Now that's funny! 😆😛

Haha :D Then title it as a Two-Shot na.

Love you too Keerthy (with a 'Y') 😉

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Lasya Adiraj

@KSGmaniac_24579

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Really cute

Sad ending 😊

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Asya_Maaneet

@Asya_Maaneet

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

I am not active on this forum anymore but I had to read your first OS! And it made me cry! and it made me miss AsYa even more than I have been.

Awesome! Amazing! Fabulous job dude! 👏 It was touching, emotional and beautifully written 😊

Great work! 😊 👍🏼 ⭐️

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: Emaani.95

Awww .. You're truly a SWEETHEART!<3
A bigg hugie for you 🤗

Hahahaha .. I meant to say that I didn't like the ending as Zoya dies in the end but the way you penned it down was great! 👍🏼 Ab samjhi? :P

What? Another part to an One-Shot??? Now that's funny! 😆😛
Haha :D Then title it as a Two-Shot na.

Love you too Keerthy (with a 'Y') 😉

when will your yucky exams will come to an end ?
just because of those evil exams i don't get to talk to you these days !

ohhh !! you didn't like the fact that zoya dies !
instead you liked how i wrote it !
now i got it ! no wonder why my sister call me a "tubelight "😆😆

yup !! it was a long OS and i'm a girl who is so lazy to type !
so i split it into two !

i lurveee you tooo !!❤️ my dear Emaan !🤗