Without You - An Asya OS ' Last part UPDATED '

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Asya_Maaneet
I am not active on this forum anymore but I had to read your first OS! And it made me cry! and it made me miss AsYa even more than I have been.
Awesome! Amazing! Fabulous job dude! 👏 It was touching, emotional and beautifully written 😊

Great work! 😊 👍🏼 ⭐️

ohhh !! thanku thanku thanku sooo much for reading this yaar !
it really means alot to me !😊
i miss my old asya too ! alot !😭
i'm really so glad you liked it :)😛

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

finally posted the last part !

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Hoor

@HooriAsadMalik

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Yea I am first one to like, comment on the last update
Thanx for the pm kiku
lovely os
emotional asad +zara and ishaan's masti =fabulous os!
keep writing

Edited by parakshi - 11 years ago

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Thanks for the PM, much appreciated! 😃

The second part was simply beautiful. ⭐️

Great job, on Asad's portrayal and his relationship with Zara. 👏

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sasir

@sasir

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

u made me cry.

but written beautifully.

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Morsmorde

@Morsmorde

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

oh so emotional os
it made me cry
lovely potrayal of characters.
yes no one can fulfilll the void of zoya but now he has zara with him.
beautifully written.
do write more.

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Revelio

@Revelio

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Thank u so much for mentioning me in ur list of dedications and i'm so sorry for not updtin, I'm still trying to get a move on with it.

Oh god kiki! I nearly cried! The 1st half had such an emotional touch to it, it was like, I cud feel Asad's pain. N zara is just like her mother, certified pagal n ishaan too, just like his dad, absolutely wild. It was like reading ayaan and Zoya's bond from when they were small.

I so hate u for killing zoya now coz it gives me a bad cringy feeling everytime I think abt it n to top it off, ur amazing writing skills. Ur just awesome n keep writing coz ur fabulous at it(but don't make me cry again).

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

if i cried reading 1st part😭

it was double in d 2nd part😭😭

but awesome part anyway😃

beautifully penned👏

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Ani

@DesiiiiGirllll

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#79

I am reading this in my class😆
I was teary eyed and a guy entered😆 he looked at me so weirdly and i just stared at my phone😆 aur kch kar bhi nai sakti thi😆
You are a great writter mahn!❤️
Asad feelings for Zara explained so genuinely❤️
NO ONE can make me cry😆 YOU made me teary girl😆
It was beautiful❤️
Write more aur next time happy endings😆
Tune meri baat nai mani na? Zoya ko zinda nai kiya na?😆🤣
AND AND AND the dedication😆❤️
Yes i thought you forgt me and i was just going to scrap you on that😆
Aww even i miss the bashing school colg things😆
I can bash abt my class right now😆
Anyways before my sir enters again i gotta leavee!! 😆

Ani😆❤️