Without You - An Asya OS ' Last part UPDATED ' - Page 10

Originally posted by: teju_KaBhi

oh so emotional os
it made me cry
lovely potrayal of characters.
yes no one can fulfilll the void of zoya but now he has zara with him.
beautifully written.
do write more.

Originally posted by: asyafreva

it was really awesome...!!

But you made me cry...!!

Beautiful!

Originally posted by: ..Ramya..

Thank u so much for mentioning me in ur list of dedications and i'm so sorry for not updtin, I'm still trying to get a move on with it.

Oh god kiki! I nearly cried! The 1st half had such an emotional touch to it, it was like, I cud feel Asad's pain. N zara is just like her mother, certified pagal n ishaan too, just like his dad, absolutely wild. It was like reading ayaan and Zoya's bond from when they were small.

I so hate u for killing zoya now coz it gives me a bad cringy feeling everytime I think abt it n to top it off, ur amazing writing skills. Ur just awesome n keep writing coz ur fabulous at it(but don't make me cry again).

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-

Thanks 😊

Thanks alot for reading ramya .

I wanted asad and ayaans kids to be like that in the show .

I dont thinkbi will write again .

I dont get the inspiration these days .

Originally posted by: ImmortalLove

i loved it..

well written..

Originally posted by: jas91

if i cried reading 1st part😭

it was double in d 2nd part😭😭

but awesome part anyway😃

beautifully penned👏

Originally posted by: aniiee

I am reading this in my class😆
I was teary eyed and a guy entered😆 he looked at me so weirdly and i just stared at my phone😆 aur kch kar bhi nai sakti thi😆
You are a great writter mahn!❤️
Asad feelings for Zara explained so genuinely❤️
NO ONE can make me cry😆 YOU made me teary girl😆
It was beautiful❤️
Write more aur next time happy endings😆
Tune meri baat nai mani na? Zoya ko zinda nai kiya na?😆🤣
AND AND AND the dedication😆❤️
Yes i thought you forgt me and i was just going to scrap you on that😆
Aww even i miss the bashing school colg things😆
I can bash abt my class right now😆
Anyways before my sir enters again i gotta leavee!! 😆



Ani😆❤️

Originally posted by: TaiLung

😭 loved it

buts its so painful

Originally posted by: TaiLung

😭 loved it

buts its so painful

Originally posted by: Emaani.95

WoW!

Awesome update Keerthy :)

You really did an awesome job! 👍🏼

I loved it!

"There, inside the crib was a little creature.

It's beautiful eyes were wet as hot tears streamed down those rosy little cheeks. But the moment it saw him it stopped crying and it's eyes went wide. A little smile graced it's tiny pouty lips. It's eyes which were brimming with tears were now filled with wonder and joy."

This was the most adorable segment of the update! I could clearly imagine the baby and felt like holding her in my arms. Such a cutie pie she is!<3

"Reality hit him. It hit him hard as though hit by a lightning bolt. He realized that the owner of those mesmerizing eyes were not Zoya.

They belonged to their daughter Zara.

Her Zara!"

Then came this amazingly written segment. I have no words for this. I had tears in my eyes when I read both of these segments which is a evidence of how good writer you are.

Lovely 👏