Mukkandar ka khel: asya FS part 4 on pg 28 - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago
beautifully written👏
loved it😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA

Beautiful update di.


Zoya by cing fire get shocked and rooted in place. Ayan confused about what to do. Tanveer standing outside to witnessing zoya's death.


Thank God asad reached by time and save zoya. And slapped that bitch.


All r known that imran is the father. Bravo najma. Love u for strong behaviour.


Haseena and co r tongue tied. Love nikhat for standing for herself.


Zoya get conscious but still shocked. She feared that asad get angry with her. Love asya mature convo. Asad realized that zoya not telling him anything for his past behaviour. But all ends well.


ASYA r finaly married and live happyly ever after.
Thanks for pm



Thanks raj
It was a lovely & long comment
Asya learned there mistakes from past & promised not to repeat it here after
Najma & nikhat finally stood up
I really wanted to see all this
When they aired mkk promo I was expecting these to happen
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Posted: 11 years ago
hmm Alls wells that ends well

Bhad mein jaye QH ka show yahan apka update padkar sach main QH yaad agaya, vo bhi kyaa din the, golden days

Anyways its all over nw
No use crying over spilt milk but ur fictions relive the old QH days

Kash show mein aisa hota

Continue writing

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome ending.. Love it.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful ending...asad was marvelous in this...n so were nikhat n nuzhat!!
Gulaabo thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
"If you want you can beat me..." when zoya said this to asad...i was literally rolling on the floor in laughter... 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res 😳
I will unres when I finish reading part 3 and 4 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

"If you want you can beat me..." when zoya said this to asad...i was literally rolling on the floor in laughter... 🤣



Oh actually she meant it from her heart
She is ready to accept any sort of punishment but she can't bare his silence
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Posted: 11 years ago
Tht was beautifull prt dear..
So lvly..
I loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part dear
loved it a lot

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