Mukkandar ka khel: asya FS part 4 on pg 28

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Part 1: below
Part 2: pg 11
Part 3 on pg 19



(I know you guys have got fed up of me. I had a public holiday today & it was a half day for me. So I was getting bored in my house. I has this concept in my mind for a long, in fact I expected something like this when they showed promo on this track & zoyaan. )

( my story starts from zoya running towards the community escaping from the gundoos sent by tanveer & ayra hiding in the same hall from vikram & Ayaan coming out to seek help after ensuring humeira's safety.)

Part 1

Zoya was extremely scared. She knew those gundoos are after her. She has to escape from here. She wanted to save najma's life. Najma can't marry that jerk Imran who has hidden truth from everyone & because of him she & asad had to suffer so much in there life. She covered herself by her dupatta. She saw Malvi Saab. She went towards him.
Zoya: Malvi Saab please save me. Some gundoos are after me they are trying to kill me.i lost my cell phone also. Please help me.
Malvi Saab: come with me beta
He took her towards the office room. On the way to the office some one came & hit them. Zoya was shocked to see Ayaan at this hour here. What is he doing here that too at this time?
Zoya: Ayaan what are you doing here?
Ayaan: Mona some gundoos are after me & Humeira. I made Humeira to sit safely upstairs. Malvi Saab please save us.
Malvi Saab: ya Allah what's going in this world? You both stay here I will call police.
He went inside.
Ayaan: Mona why are you here that too at this time! What happened?
Zoya explained him everything in detail. Ayaan was too shocked.

In KV

Dilshad was in hall. She received Imran & his family & made them sit comfortably.
Malvi Saab: dilshad bee it's time call both the brides.
Dilshad: ji Malvi Saab.
Dilshad went inside to call zoya & najma. But she found only najma inside. She started searching zoya every where. Dilshad started panicking. She came to hall & called asad.
Dilshad: asad zoya is not in this house.
Asad: kya? Where she has gone at this time?
Dilshad: I don't know asad. I tried her phone but it's not reachable. I am really scared asad. What happened to my zoya?
Najma came towards them.
Najma: Baath kya hai ammi? Zoya Kahan hai?
Dilshad: Patha nahi beta.
Asad: I have told her not to leave this house without informing me. She is really irresponsible.
Dilshad: try to find her beta. I am really scared. I feel something wrong has happened to her.
Imran & his family came towards them.
Imran: what's the problem bhaijaan?
Asad: zoya is missing.
Haseena bee: ya Allah! Did she ran away from her nikkah?
Asad shouted: shut up! How can you think about her like that?
Chand bee: beta we will conduct Imran & najma's nikkah first.
Najma: no. We don't know where is zoya? She is the one who took initiative for this nikkah, this nikkah will happen only with the prescence of my BFF zoya. I hope Imran agrees with me. ( I hate cvs to conduct najran's nikkah in zoya's absence, they completely forgot that zoya was the one who took initiative to set najran nikkah & najma was extremely selfish to get married without even bothering about her BFF. Even dilshad & asad. Even after all the chaos that happened in zoya's life najma didn't even bother to call & wish zoya happy b'day.)
Imran sadly: ji najma is right.
Haseena bee: ya Allah what are we going to do now? Some one try to find this girl.
Asad had no idea where to search for zoya. He made a call to one of his close friend who is a dysp in rank. He called & informed him the matter & asked him to find her as soon as possible. He send zoya's photo as an mms.
He prayed: Allah please save my zoya.

Najma & dilshad has started crying. Imran was trying To console them. But they were extremely tensed. It was that time one man came inside with a courier to asad. He took it. When he opened it he got shock of his life. It had 2 photographs in 1 zoya, Ayaan & Malvi Saab was standing & in other zoya was in ayaan's embrace. Both the photos fell from his hands. He was completely shivering.


So should I continue?


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aseelashah thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yuppeee
Iam first😆
Oh dear i will never fed up of ur stories.
I love ur stories.
Its amazing update dear.
Pls continue soon
Edited by aseelashah - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ohhh no...
U should continue...
Liked it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start dear
loved it
so i guess here ayaan n zoya are not getting married
but asad is not marrying zoya😵
oh god...was that tanveer again..😡\
do continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start
Interesting and different pls do continue!
Thanks for the pm😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start dear...of course u should continue... No doubt...I lvd it...continue soon dear 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mooumi

Awesome start dear...of course u should continue... No doubt...I lvd it...continue soon dear 😃


come THERE.. rsfs..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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YESSS CONTINUE
OMGGG PLZZZ
WHAT DOES THAT PIC MEAN
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey thats amazing
U knw even i imagined this nt to happen
bt i m loving it
Cont soon
Superb start
Update soon
Yes i completely agree that najma shud have wait
Lovd it
Cont soon
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hai pls do write as I love u r story pls do continue soon.
love chahatmalhotra

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