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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
Asad trust zoya & ayaan
He told humeira & nikhat that he will bring both zoya & ayaan safely
Continue soon
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Thanks
Ya asad had really changed at that point of time. He is not the old asad. He had learned from his mistakes
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 4

Fire! The building had been set with fire! Soon it will start spreading inside. Tanveer had locked the doors. Ayaan was in a dilemma. How will they escape. Zoya was just stunt. She saw her nightmare once more. 17 yrs back in a big building a 3 yr old kid was crying for help to save her & her ammi. But no one helped. Finally she saw her ammi taken away by fire in front of her eyes.
Once more fire has started taking her life. She was just still. Profusely sweating. Ayaan was shocked by zoya's reactions. He called her but she was still. Breathing heavy. He doesn't know how will they save themselves.

Asad had already given zoya's number along with her photo before itself when he complained about her missing. When asad gave tanveer's cell number afterwards they found out that zoya's cell was in a maternity clinic on the way to outskirts of city from the time she was missing. Tanveer's number too was showing the same location along with zoya's. Tanveer's cell also showed her locality in community marriage hall near chow bazaar & then again in the maternity clinic. So the police team started to the clinic & asad also joined them.

Tanveer was standing outside & enjoying by seeing the site of building burning in fire. This time she want to make sure that zoya shouldn't survive.
She had tried 8 times & failed. This time she couldn't afford. So also put gundoos all the other 3 sides of building to watch if zoya & Ayaan escapes.
She was having extreme pleasure by seeing the fire. She was laughing evilly.
Thupak! Thupak!
She had been slapped on both side of her face unexpectedly & due to it she fell down. When she raised her head she was shocked to see a furious asad.
Asad roared: arrest her inspector. This mad women has tried to kill my fianc no of times.
Before she could get up or respond she was surrounded by police & was handcuffed. Asad didn't wait to see tanveer get arrested. He ran inside. Fire had started spreading inside. He broke the door & went inside shouting zoya zoya
He found Ayaan holding an unconscious zoya & he too was coughing due to suffocation. Asad took zoya in his arms & dragged Ayaan outside.
They were able to go out before the fire has completely ate the building.

Asad was holding zoya too close to his chest. If he was 5 minutes late he would have lost her & also his brother. On the way back he asked Ayaan to make a call to Docter & inform him to be in KV soon. After calling docter he called sm & informed them what actually happened & asked them to meet in KV.

In KV

Dilshad, najma & Humeira was extremely happy to seen Ayaan & zoya back safely. Docter was already waiting there.
Every one from sm arrived as they were still worried. Once after the initial check up Ayaan came out & gave his statement to the police constable who had accompanied them. He explained in detail what exactly happened & also revealed what zoya had informed him.
Each & every soul present there was shocked when they heard that Imran was the father of tanveer's unborn baby.
Najma was crying so badly. She never expected Imran will cheat her & hide such important truth from her even after claiming that he loves her.
Asad was so furious. Imran had first broken nikhat's heart now najma's. Because of his coward ness he & zoya had to face so much misery in past 3 months. He called haseena bee & asked to come immediately to KV. He didn't disclose the truth. He only said that one of his enemy kidnapped zoya & Ayaan & tried to murder them. Now they are back home safely.

Qureshis arrived happily thinking that since zoya is back they could now conduct najran nikkah. Once when they entered they were shocked to find sm people also.

Haseena bee: now since zoya is back home same we can call Malvi Saab & conduct nikkah today itself.
Asad: before that don't you want to know what actually happened to zoya & Ayaan?
Haseena bee: ha beta
Dilshad: zoya & Ayaan was kidnapped by a women called tanveer. Imran do you know her?
Imran: ji nahi ammi.
Thupak!
Imran was shocked to see najma had slapped him.
Najma: you liar. You don't know tanveer. If you don't know her how done she is pregnant with your kid?
Imran: I am sorry najma. I went out with my friends & I was drunk. This tanveer trapped me. I was not conscious. She utilised it. After coming back to reality I was ready to accept her but she rejected me. After a month she came & told me that she is pregnant with my kid. I couldn't accept a girl like her. I know I shouldn't have hidden about it from you. But I didn't want to lose you. I really love you.
Najma: no Imran if you really loved me you would have never hidden it from me. You don't love me nor trust me. It's because of you my bhaijaan & zoya got separated twice. Even today tanveer trapped zoya & tried to kill her. She also used Ayaan bhaijaan & tried to kill him too. It's all because of you. I hate you Imran. Never ever show your face Infront of me again. Get out.
Saying that she throwed her ring on his face & went inside.
NikhAt: haseena bee few hours back you were insulting my family & my brothers. Now what you have to say? Your son slept with a call girl & made her pregnant. Hiding that he first engaged me & then najma. You don't have to say anything about your son's mistake?
The entire qureshis was tounge tied. They were really ashamed.
NikhAt: now listen to me carefully. Never ever come Infront of me or my sisters with your sons alliance. Get out!
Everyone was shocked to see NikhAt in this form. Qureshis went from there.
Badi bee: asad beta you are really lucky to have a girl like zoya in your life.
Ayaan: ha bhaijaan. She loves you & your family more than herself.
Asad & dilshad had tears. It's true that zoya loves them more than herself & she even kept her life in danger & saved najma's life today.

Zoya's room

Zoya opened her eyes. Her head was paining severely. She remembered the whole days events & then she shouted. Aag aag!
Najma was there with her. Hearing zoya's voice she called.
Najma: zoya you are safe with us. Don't worry.
Seeing najma zoya remembered about tanveer & imran's relation. Zoya was not oriented to time. Najma was in her causal dress. Did najma get married? Ayaan how is he?
Zoya: najma Imran
Najma hugged her & cried.
Najma: do you love me that much zoya! To save me you trapped yourself & almost risked your life.
Zoya: najma I was not aware that Imran was tanveer's kids father. I thought she was trying to trap him just like she trapped mr.khan.
Najma: thank you zoya. For saving me from such a jerk.
Zoya: Ayaan?
Najma: he is taking rest in the next room. He is fine.

Najma came & informed everyone that zoya gained consciousness. Asad informed police to come & take zoya's statement. Everyone went & met her. Dilshad hugged her & kissed her. She couldn't believe that zoya had gone through so much on this day.

Zoya's eyes were searching for asad. Every one could sense it.
After everyone left zoya's room asad came inside. He looked at her.
Zoya: mr.khan
Asad didn't speak. Zoya could sense that he is angry with her.
Zoya: mr.khan. I am sorry. I know I broke my promise. At that moment I only thought about najma. I am sorry. Please talk to me. I can't bare your silence. If you want you can beat me.
Asad: zoya how could you go out on your own like this? After you came to know about Imran you should have informed me. But you went out on your own. Najma is my sister I have complete right to know about her. I know in the past I had never trusted you. I always wanted proofs to believe your words. I thought in the past 1 month I changed. I felt you were able to realise it. If I had not trusted you would I ever agree to met Imran & his family when you said?
Zoya was crying so badly.
Asad: but today I realised I have failed. You have proved it. How can you be so impulsive zoya. You only thought about najma. What about me? If something had happened to you today how will I bare it? Have you ever thought about it zoya?
Zoya: I am sorry mr.khan. I am really sorry. Hereafter I will share everything with you. I love you mr.khan. And I love your family also. More than myself. I can't bare anything wrong happening to them. I am sorry. Please forgive me.
Asad took her to a bone crushing hug.
Soya: you are not angry with me na?
Asad: no. Infact you saved my najma's life. Thank you. But hereafter don't break your promise.
Zoya: no mr.khan I won't.
Asad: if so then let's get married
Zoya: abhi?
Asad: ha. I will call the Malvi Saab. It's not very late. Already our nikkah got broken twice. But today I don't want to break it.

Zoya had given her statement to the police constable & they informed that they will take care of the rest & tanveer will be punished for her deeds.
After giving statement all the khan girls & Humeira helped zoya to get ready. Asad had called & informed Malvi Saab.
Shireen, razia & gaffour wanted to leave. But Ayaan & Humeira was adamant. So they too stayed back. Dilshad asked asad to freshen up before Malvi Saab arrives. She also insisted Ayaan to get ready as he was also in a bad condition.

Once Malvi Saab reached asad was accompanied to hall by Ayaan & dilshad. They made him to sit in the one side of the curtain.
Zoya was brought to hall by khan sisters & Humeira under a large dupatta. She was made to sit opposite side of the curtain.
They both said qubool hai & entered the sacred bond of marriage.

The end!

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Posted: 11 years ago
awsom updt
love tht nazma slap imraan and broke her relation with him
asya got marrienf
lovely ending
thnx fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...
Asya are married...
Why u end this ff?????
U could have showm asya married life ...
Eager to read ur more asya stories...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aYASHIKA

Awesome update...
Asya are married...
Why u end this ff?????
U could have showm asya married life ...
Eager to read ur more asya stories...



I have already an ff where asya are married
This story was basically what I thought would happen after seeing the promo
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Posted: 11 years ago
so nice ending... asya got back together... and married

and live ... thank go for that...

tanveer finally in jail...



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for Update.
It was Nice Ending.😊

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(ASAD will be always KSG ONLY,ASYA=KABHI ONLY)
PRIYAKABHI.
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the update
so the billi was slapped and arrested 👏
zoya unconscious poor thing the fear of the fire
all came from SM and haseena and her sons were
given what was due to them
way to go najma and nikhat
najma and zoya moment was cute
oh asad is mad the thought of losing her 😭
loved how he doesnt want to waste anytime
nikaah now today
well written love this MKK
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful update di.


Zoya by cing fire get shocked and rooted in place. Ayan confused about what to do. Tanveer standing outside to witnessing zoya's death.


Thank God asad reached by time and save zoya. And slapped that bitch.


All r known that imran is the father. Bravo najma. Love u for strong behaviour.


Haseena and co r tongue tied. Love nikhat for standing for herself.


Zoya get conscious but still shocked. She feared that asad get angry with her. Love asya mature convo. Asad realized that zoya not telling him anything for his past behaviour. But all ends well.


ASYA r finaly married and live happyly ever after.
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