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Posted: 11 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: sweeetyrocs
Dear... That was a nice update...
Yesss the story needs to move a little... But i have full trust in ur writing...

The accidental kissed happened... N how nicely u have made it...

The elevator moments were full of AsYa closeness n fighting their inner feelings...

Waiting to knoe who that secret person is???

N pls try to update next part soon...

Hey thanks for the support n the honesty...I appreciate both...n I'll try to make it up..n pick up pace...but no pormises as yet...n as for the elevator scene..😆 thanks!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: Shubh007
AMAZING UPDATE...😃👏

LOVE IT...😃😊

UPDATE NXT PART SOON...😉😃

Thank u very much...will try and update!!!😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: gowtu
Hey tk ur tym.. But dnt stop it midway..

Thanks...I mite just re write it!!!😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: nilusoni
Amazing update
thanx for pm

Thanks!!😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: Linsie
85% asya love it...❤️

Hey thanks for the support and the spamming and still sticking with the story..I really appreciate ur efforts..n ur encouragement...thank u very much once again!!😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: rajsmi
Interesting storyline...

Thanks a lot!!😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: BeYourself
Hi Aashna,
first of all, thank you for keeping your promise and giving an accidental kiss in this update.. 😉
your idea of it was very much different!! 😳

as a reader, i am loving your story and i have full faith in your story telling!!

so just take your time...i am sure that whatever doubts you are having will soon be solved..😳

Gal..thanks for ur lovely words..n for liking this update...I didnt like it that much..esp in context to the story...but its done now...chalo will see how it goes bout from here on...will try to get my head around it and continue this story...😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: gowtu
Awesome... Loved the elevator prt... Continue soon..

Thank u ...m glad u liked it...I tried to be a lil diff😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: laks_vish
oh wow kissing and lot of teasing(unintentional)...nice update Aashna!! eargerly wanting to know the shadow person

Hey thanks for ur comment...I am glad u liked the unintentional kiss...I just wish it was better excuted..but ho gaya ab😕 😆 chalo will try to change things up..n as for the shadow guy...in due time!!!😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-
omg!! it was the cutest n hottest elevator scene i have ever read!! loved it...
glad to know that asya aren't able to get each other out of their minds...
well let's see when their paths will converge at a point!!?
why am i feeling that the mystery man is rihaan ??
continue soon

p.s - i donno why u r tensed up...i liked all the updates but yes it's way too slow...even u r correct...u can't miss out the details...
i don't know but i want to read it fully...n please don't leave it in between...u can take as much time as u want...
i am sure all the readers would wait...

O gal...u n ur wonderful comments..it just makes me happy even though I am seriously bummeed with this update..but still m gald that u enjoyed the elevator scene..n as for them not able to get each other out of their heads..I thinks thats wat I dont like..its too soon...😕

N I wont say much bout the mystrey man...😉

Well I am tensed cos I am not happy with the way this sotry is shaping out..I want more with it..so I might just re-write it if I can..or take a looonng brk n come back to it...its slow yes...n its not gripping...I want that...its a suspence story..it needs to be dark...so thats my issues...will try to work through it..thanks for ur encouraging words though...means a lot😊

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