AsYa vs. ZoYaan vs. AsYaan: Disintegrated FF (Chap. 2)

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SimplySmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Author's Note:

K so clearly I need to state the reason behind why I am writing this story

YES THERE WILL BE SCENES WITH ZOYAAN, AND YES ZOYA AND AYAAN WILL DEVELOP FEELINGS FOR EACH OTHER, BUT THE MAIN IDEA OF THIS STORY IS THE BROTHERS CLASH, AND TO ME THE ONLY, INTERESTING, WAY THEY CAN CLASH IS THROUGH ZOYA. I KNOW SOME PEOPLE MAY BE OFFENDED BY THIS, AND IN NO WAY DID I MEAN TO OFFEND ANYONE, THIS IS JUST A MADE UP IDEA THAT I WANT TO TURN INTO A STORY

so guys if you are really against zoyaan and would hate to read this, then dont read this, i would much rather have people not reading my work then leaving behind hateful comments that are pointed towards my writing

didnt mean to offend anyone

sorry if I did

- Sonny

Edited by Hophop1456 - 11 years ago

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RAJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Hophop1456

Author's Note:

K so clearly I need to state the reason behind why I am writing this story

YES THERE WILL BE SCENES WITH ZOYAAN, AND YES ZOYA AND AYAAN WILL DEVELOP FEELINGS FOR EACH OTHER, BUT <font color="#ff0000">THE MAIN IDEA OF THIS STORY IS THE BROTHERS CLASH</font>, AND TO ME THE ONLY, INTERESTING, WAY THEY CAN CLASH IS THROUGH ZOYA. I KNOW SOME PEOPLE MAY BE OFFENDED BY THIS, AND IN NO WAY DID I MEAN TO OFFEND ANYONE, THIS IS JUST A MADE UP IDEA THAT I WANT TO TURN INTO A STORY

so guys if you are really against zoyaan and would hate to read this, then dont read this, i would much rather have people not reading my work then leaving behind hateful comments that are pointed towards my writing

didnt mean to offend anyone

sorry if I did

- Sonny

thanks for the note. I have nothing against your writing. I have a request write zoyan in your title so its more easy to avoid. I would love u for this. I hope i dont hurt your feelings.

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royalsgirl93

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Hophop1456

Author's Note:

K so clearly I need to state the reason behind why I am writing this story

YES THERE WILL BE SCENES WITH ZOYAAN, AND YES ZOYA AND AYAAN WILL DEVELOP FEELINGS FOR EACH OTHER, BUT THE MAIN IDEA OF THIS STORY IS THE BROTHERS CLASH, AND TO ME THE ONLY, INTERESTING, WAY THEY CAN CLASH IS THROUGH ZOYA. I KNOW SOME PEOPLE MAY BE OFFENDED BY THIS, AND IN NO WAY DID I MEAN TO OFFEND ANYONE, THIS IS JUST A MADE UP IDEA THAT I WANT TO TURN INTO A STORY

so guys if you are really against zoyaan and would hate to read this, then dont read this, i would much rather have people not reading my work then leaving behind hateful comments that are pointed towards my writing

didnt mean to offend anyone

sorry if I did

pllzzz continue this story it seems intersting and miss ur others storie too

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SimplySmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: royalsgirl93

pllzzz continue this story it seems intersting and miss ur others storie too

I am trying to update this one and my other one, I am almost done with BT, but have no idea when I can update, lets hope its soon

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asyaarshilover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Bring it on
Concept is interesting
But plz dnt let asya suffer a lot 😭
I knw is missunderstooding all ths by his own decisions but still m gonna hate him in ths story
But cont soon

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SimplySmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover
Bring it on
Concept is interesting
But plz dnt let asya suffer a lot 😭
I knw is missunderstooding all ths by his own decisions but still m gonna hate him in ths story
But cont soon

dont worry, dont worry...

asya will suffer😆😆

but please refer to my signature, or banner or whatever you wanna call it

Edited by Hophop1456 - 11 years ago

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nilusoni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

wonderful sounds interesting

thanx for pm

plz pm me for updates

continue soon

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SimplySmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: tapasidas
Exactly what I wanted the bro clash to be! I love it. I mean during tannu's entry asad hurted zoya so much and zoya forgave him so easily 'Asad ki taraf se thora sa jelousy to banta hai na !' neverthless I am an Asya fan and I wud want to see them together at the end. About zoya I wud want her to have a mere crush not exactly love. Update soonish!

I know what you mean

Zoya, every freaking single time, forgave him, even after the bloody Zoyaan thing

I dont give a crap that it was the test of their love, the guy traded you for his sisters happiness and you go back running into his arms as if nothing happened. DUDE, NO, whatever happened to the independent Zoya

And yes I totally agree with you, there should be a jealous Asad, we never saw any jealousy from Asad's side, and jealousy is ALWAYS better, funnier when its coming from the male

I really wished that they had stuck with the original summary of QH, I know it included more of Zoyaan but it was way better then this shit

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safa/fuii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

amazing concept... continue ASAP! :)
i dont like zoyaan but love this concept...
soo plzz continue to write...!

-fuii-

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SimplySmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Splash-ASYA
amazing concept... continue ASAP! :)
i dont like zoyaan but love this concept...
soo plzz continue to write...!

-fuii-

yeah I hate zoyaan as well, dont have any idea how I will write down their scenes, I will probably need to keep a sick bag nearby, just in case

same I really wanted to see the brothers clash in the show, but looks like gul had something else in mind