AsYa vs. ZoYaan vs. AsYaan: Disintegrated FF (Chap. 2) - Page 7

Originally posted by: Hophop1456

Tanveer plays the innocent game alot

and that voice whenever she tries to explain shes not guilty just makes me wanna rip her head off

if there are 5, then who are the other 4

yeah there will be more of heartbreaks and tears rather romance,

I mean Ayaan, thinks that hes in love with Zoya, but...

And then Asad realizes, what he lost and tries to win his love back over stepping the boundary of his and Ayaan's relationship

so the brothers definetley clash, with words and hands,

and thanks for the comment, my english teacher believes something else, so always nice to hear comments like that

Originally posted by: sageflower7

English teachers these days have syllabuses and answer templates. Supposedly structured and objective assessments in school does not allow for creativity in writing. Anyway story writing was never a school kinda thing right? But seriously your flow of thought and language is really good. Being able to convey emotions in words is no mean feat! !

Originally posted by: tapasidas

Poor Asad! Can't he just kill dat cat and spend the rest of his life in jail dat wud be better than spending his whole life wid her.