AsYa vs. ZoYaan vs. AsYaan: Disintegrated FF (Chap. 2)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys, I know I still have to finish my other story, but this idea came into my mind and wanted to know what you guys think of it and whether I should continue or discontinue the idea. So its mainly based on Asad and Ayaan's brothers clashing. So they do have a verbal and maybe even physical fight. So here it is...

The story starts off from the failure of AsYa's first Nikhaah. Zoya is very heartbroken from what she saw that night so she runs away and stays in an orphanage. Asad searches day and night looking for Zoya while his mum and sister ignore him like plague, he asks help from Ayaan and they both search for Zoya. Meanwhile Tanveer is trying her level best to make herself the wife of Asad, while Asad is getting highly irritated by her and wants her out of the house but Dilshad makes her stay back taking pity on her. Ayaan soon finds Zoya and begs her to come back to KV, Zoya says that she cannot go back, that Asad never had any feeling towards her and that she was just making a fool of herself believing that he loved her. She also mentions that this wasn't the reason she came to India anyway. Getting curious Ayaan asks why Zoya did come to India and Zoya not having the energy to hide anything tells him everything about her father. Ayaan decides to help out Zoya, in her search for her father making her happy, while he hides the fact that he knows where Zoya is from his brother. During their search they both begin to develop feelings towards each other and Ayaan wonders if what his brother did was on purpose and his brother never really did love Zoya. Meanwhile in KV, Dilshad begins to see how because of her son Tanveer's life is ruined, so she forces Asad to get married to Tanveer while Asad rejects in every way as he starts to remember what actually happened that night and sees the real mask of Tanveer. Ayaan finds out that Zoya's father has some connection to SM, Zoya wonders that some way they need to get her into SM to find out more. Ayaan has and idea and tells Zoya that they should get married just so she can enter SM. Zoya at first is very shocked and denies immediately which saddens Ayaan. But Zoya overhears that Asad and Tanveer are getting married, so out of anger she agrees to marry Ayaan. Zoya enters SM as Ayaan's wife, making a ver heartbroken Humeira cry, and the search for her father begins. Asad finds out that Zoya is at SM and is over the moon, he rushes to SM but is stopped by Ayaan. Asad asks why Ayaan didn't tell him that he knew where Zoya was. Ayaan, now thinking that he loves Zoya, tells his brother that he doesn't deserve Zoya and he should forget about her since she is his wife. Asad is shocked and brothers clash begins.



Please comment or like telling me whether you would like me to continue or not.

Thanks for reading😃

P.S. KSG is the only Asad in this and my other story, just putting it out there


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Saima-Syed thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow sounds brilliant
Look forward to the brothers clash...concept is really good, please do continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Seems interesting
Looking forward for brother clash
But plz don't separate asad & zoya permanently
Do pm me when u update
Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Love it mate!
Plz plz plz plz plz plz plz dont make us w8 now
Update really really really really quick !
Plz plz plz
Do send pm
Lets see or shall i say READ wht happens next
Really curious
So update soonish!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Potentially explosive and angsty!! Like the idea ... would love to receive PM updates thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I really like this concept
but please make Asad and Zoya together


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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is a really unique concept
Would love to read it
Plz plz plz plz co t soon
An plz plz do pm me
And plz make zoya love asad
I can't see her loving someone else
I know a bit possessive but I can't help it
Because its asya 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sounds Interesting.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: masteruni6

Love it mate!
Plz plz plz plz plz plz plz dont make us w8 now
Update really really really really quick !
Plz plz plz
Do send pm
Lets see or shall i say READ wht happens next
Really curious
So update soonish!


Thanks for the amazing comment

Will try to update it as so as possible

Luckily I am on march break, but unluckily I have a couple of assignments that are just screaming at me to get them finished, why did I take art?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sageflower7


Potentially explosive and angsty!! Like the idea ... would love to receive PM updates thanks


Really because I was so not going for that, I wanted this FF to focus more on the relationship between asad and Ayaan more than asad and zoya, as much as I hate to see it I really want to see a brothers clash trac in qubool hai but don't think that will happen any time soon,

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