AsYa vs. ZoYaan vs. AsYaan: Disintegrated FF (Chap. 2)

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SimplySmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: kurilovesKSG
I really like this concept
but please make Asad and Zoya together

We are just going to have to wait and see

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SimplySmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: rosyluck
This is a really unique concept
Would love to read it
Plz plz plz plz co t soon
An plz plz do pm me
And plz make zoya love asad
I can't see her loving someone else
I know a bit possessive but I can't help it
Because its asya 😆

Thanks for the nice comment

Will try to update as soon as possible

Can't promise anything though

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Alone111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Hmmm intrstng.. Lukng frwrd for the clsh.. Continue ssoon

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RAJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Brothers clash is good. But i m not interested to read another ZOYAN. Zoya is ayan wife and both develop feelings dont suit me. I cant bear another zoyan.

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sarbrathan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

This is a negative opinion so don't read if you don't want to read negative comments!

I hate ZoYaan and I am appalled by this concept! I hate Ayaan in the show and just reading the concept I hate him even more because Ayaan could do something like this! Zoya (my most favourite character in QH) can never do such a thing and it will be against her character, I hate concept and I will never read this story. If you continue please write ZoYaan in your title, so I know what to avoid!

Your name seems familiar, which probably means I have read and enjoyed your other work (or it could just be posts in general) so please don't take my opinion personally. I am not saying anything about you or your writing! I can see you are creative, this is just something I will never read!😊

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sarbrathan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA
Brothers clash is good. But i m not interested to read another ZOYAN. Zoya is ayan wife and 🤢🤢🤢both develop feelings dont suit me🤢🤢🤢. I cant bear another zoyan.

Completely agree! I despise ZoYaan! 🤢

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RAJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: sarbrathan
This is a negative opinion so don't read if you don't want to read negative comments!
I hate ZoYaan and I am appalled by this concept! I hate Ayaan in the show and just reading the concept I hate him even more because Ayaan could do something like this! Zoya (my most favourite character in QH) can never do such a thing and it will be against her character, I hate concept and I will never read this story. If you continue please write ZoYaan in your title, so I know what to avoid!

Your name seems familiar, which probably means I have read and enjoyed your other work (or it could just be posts in general) so please don't take my opinion personally. I am not saying anything about you or your writing! I can see you are creative, this is just something I will never read!😊

well said dear. I just hate ayan may be more than tanveer. I have nothing against the author. But i agree with sarbrathan. If u want to write zoyan as a married couple and they develop feelings for each other then pls write zoyan in your title. Because bro clash title sounds interesting but the reason more disgusting.

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SimplySmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: sarbrathan
This is a negative opinion so don't read if you don't want to read negative comments!
I hate ZoYaan and I am appalled by this concept! I hate Ayaan in the show and just reading the concept I hate him even more because Ayaan could do something like this! Zoya (my most favourite character in QH) can never do such a thing and it will be against her character, I hate concept and I will never read this story. If you continue please write ZoYaan in your title, so I know what to avoid!

Your name seems familiar, which probably means I have read and enjoyed your other work (or it could just be posts in general) so please don't take my opinion personally. I am not saying anything about you or your writing! I can see you are creative, this is just something I will never read!😊

Completely okay with ur comment

everybody has different opinions and they should feel free to express them, and honestly in the show there was literally, like actually no point in the whole Zoyaan fisaco, I thought that Zoya would be the reason the two brothers go against each other, but apparently not, so I thought that this story would be a better way to express my ideas, i guess you can say. If you dont want to read it go ahead, dont read it, its not really like the world will come to an end if you dont, everybody has their own likes and dislikes, like i hate Humeira cos she is a selfish bitch,

but if you dont want to read it, seriously DONT READ IT, because there will be many ZoYaan scenes that you probably will hate but in the end its just adds to the development of AsYa's relationship