A Broken heart deserves a second chance..-SS(KABHI)- Chapter 5 : pg-13

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey !

None of u know mee.. coz i haven't really written anything on this forum except for some posts i guess .. but i love to read all the stories in this forum and i must admit all the writers are truly talented and u guys are jus amazing and u ppl are the one's who hav inspired and ur work has motivated me to write this story .. so coming to the story .. U might not find Zoya (Surbhi) in the first few chapters but she'll be the heart of the story as it proceeds... and this story begins from AAK's schooling and here it goes...
Prologue ..

Asad - 12 years old
Ayaan - 10 years old
Najma - 10 years old
Sameera - 12 years old

I woke up on a summer morning to hear my sister crying her lungs out !! I walked out of my room and asked my mom why she was crying and then I found out that she misplaced one of her fav t-shirt and that's why she was crying !

Like seriously u cry for such stupid things - I said and walked back to my room only to hear her whipping louder :P i seriously don't understand these girls !! :P

I got ready for school and went out and found my lil brother trying to cool all cool with his hair all spiked up ! He thought he looked cool but for me he looked like a porcupine !!
I had my fav toast and juice ! and to school with my annoying sister and my stupid brother !! They are annoying and stupid but also the ppl I love the most besides ammi !

so the day went like every other day but I met a girl her name was sameera !! she wasn't any ordinary girl ! I was mentally and physically attracted to her ! I actually realised the famous line" LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT " actually has a meaning ::P

but then I just let it be coz I am very young and don't even know if ill meet this pretty lady again ! and I went back home but that special girl's pretty face lead to manyyy sleepless nights ...


And here it ends :P Boring was it :P so as i said zoya wont be there for a few chapters ... And so bear with me if u can :P And ASYA IN MY STORY WILL ALWAYS BE KABHI (KARAN & SURBHI) ..
No offence to all the raqesh fans ... he's doin a gr8 job but Karan is theonly AAK for me ... And the other reason for me to write this story is karan coz i miss him like crazy on the show ... And please do give me all ur reviews and buddy me if u want pms :) and sorry if i bored u :P

Okay just a fill in ... Sameera is not the same as what she is in the show !! i just couldn't find any other name so i made her sameera ... so she THE GOOD SAMEERA :P

Love ,

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yay i am the first [:D/]

So it starts from there childhood

Love at first sight 😆 😳

No zoya for some time no problem waisa bhe she have to come sooner or later 😃

New character sameera hmmm interesting

Btw i can understand,i too miss KSG a lot 😭

But u shld had started it in a fan fiction forum like we all had did

Cont soon plx and a long chap plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am in👍🏼 interesting story line😃 Asad and Sameera huh😲 but i am not worried😆 Zoya will be there na soon😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting start ,,
Do pm me for next part too ,,
and update sooon !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rosamale

I am in👍🏼 interesting story line😃 Asad and Sameera huh😲 but i am not worried😆 Zoya will be there na soon😳


sammeeraa is not what she's in tthe show .. so u dont hav to worry :) An thanks for ur revieww :) im a big fan of ur work .. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

Interesting start ,,

Do pm me for next part too ,,
and update sooon !


Thank you and i will ... !!
I love ur work too !! especially Asad and Zoya in Italy :D
Thank you :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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eve i read about the whole Fan fiction forum but i really wanted to post this on this forum :)
And yes ur the FIRST ONE SOO A BIGGERRR THANK YOU TO U !! And yes she will come very soon and i promise to update soon as well !! and i must say that true love never dies is one of my fav FFs .. .so pleasee update that soonn ...

Thank You :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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eve i read about the whole Fan fiction forum but i really wanted to post this on this forum :)
And yes ur the FIRST ONE SOO A BIGGERRR THANK YOU TO U !! And yes she will come very soon and i promise to update soon as well !! and i must say that true love never dies is one of my fav FFs .. .so pleasee update that soonn ...

Thank You :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Poojabugga


eve i read about the whole Fan fiction forum but i really wanted to post this on this forum :)
And yes ur the FIRST ONE SOO A BIGGERRR THANK YOU TO U !! And yes she will come very soon and i promise to update soon as well !! and i must say that true love never dies is one of my fav FFs .. .so pleasee update that soonn ...

Thank You :)



Ahh i can understand
Ur welcome 😉
M glad tht u like my FF but i wont cont it till may
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: asyaarshilover



Ahh i can understand
Ur welcome 😉
M glad tht u like my FF but i wont cont it till may

thats okay i'll wait ... :)

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