A Broken heart deserves a second chance..-SS(KABHI)- Chapter 5 : pg-13 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update




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Posted: 11 years ago
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This second part is very good 👏

They talk and forgot about their classes 😆

Continue soon please 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Just read both chapters. Nice ! Interesting to see where it goes!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 3

Rhea & Zoya live in an apartment together !

Zoya's POV

I couldn't sleep all night thinking about Rhea will react when I tell her that I was sitting in the canteen the whole afternoon talking to a senior !

But I know Asad is not that kinda guy ... he's really honest .. I guess ..I don't know but I did open up a lot with him .. and we spoke forever !! okay now shut up and sleep u have to get up early tomo !! its ur turn to cook! I told myself and finally sleep took over !

Asad's POV

Arnav's right I have never spoken to someone for so long ! and I did open up to her a lot more than I should have in our second talk ! but she's one of the prettiest girl I have ever seen !! OHO what s up with me ..???!! how can I think about a girl like this ! ?!?!

And that stupid Arjun he was staring at her like as though she's the 1st girl he has ever seen .. I have apologise to her tommo ! she must have felt so embarrassed with that idiot ! and I have to tell Arjun to stay away from her !! okay now sleep Mr.Asad Ahmed Khan ... u have to get up early tommo or else ammi will get really mad !!

Next Day

KHAN VILLA

Everyone were having they're breakfast !! And Asad was having his fav Black Coffee !

Asad's POV

Now whenever I have black coffee , all I can think of is zoya ..

Dilshad's POV

Why is this Asad smiling so much while having his coffee ! let me ask him only !!

Asad why are u smiling so much ?? I asked

Wo ammi, wo actually ... he was stammering ..

Please don't start ur wo actually !! please asad .. im in no mood to listen to ur copyright dialogue !! I said irritated !!

Okay ... he said ..

Ammi u know yesterday bhaijaan didn't attend classes after lunch ... Ayaan said with his evil grin ..

Asad choked on his coffee ... and najma helps him out !!

Asad ? he ayaan telling the truth ?? I asked shocked !

Wo ammi actually muje college kay liye der horahi hai .. tho mai chalta hoon ... bye everybody and have a nice day !! and ayaan I need to talk to in the Evening ... !! he said stressing on the evening word !!

Byee .. everyone replied except ayaan who looked terrified ! :P

Asad's POV

How does ayaan know that I bunked the classes after lunch !!??? I didn't tell him anything !! I just hope he doesn't know that I was with zoya ! ammi is goin to get all type of ideas in her head !! but I need to find out who told ayaan this !!

Zoya's POV

Rhea are u ready ??? Breakfast's ready dude !! Come fast or else we'll be late today !! I screaming at the top of my voice so that she could hear me ...

And finally she came running and we had our French toast and some juice and left for college ..!!

In college

Zoya's POV

Me and rhea took a taxi today coz we were pretty late today and if we would take an auto rickshaw we would even more late !! and we got down that taxi and rhea was paying the driver when I saw Asad , Arnav , Arjun & another guy who I assumed to be one of their friend ! And rhea turned and she's like ..

Lets go ,... She said

Okay ! I said ..

All of them smiled at me and this didn't go un-noticed by rhea ! and I smiled back ! but she didn't notice that ( thank god ) :P

And we left that place !!

Why were those seniors smiling at u ?? she asked ..

Which seniors ?? I asked innocently

The ones near the parking area !! she litrally yelled

I don't I didn't notice anyone .. I lied

I told all the guys are the same .. u better don't talk to anyone !! she said in a serious tone !!

But how can u just say that they're like the ppl u talking about , maybe they're the good ones ! I said

How do u know !?? u just said u didn't even notice those guys !! and now ur defending for them ! she asked in a doubtful tone

Im not defending them ! I m just saying u can't judge a book by its cover right !?! I said

Firstly , they're books ! Second , u have no idea of how these guys look all innocent but inside they are the same idiotic ppl ! and third , u better don't talk to any of these guys !! she said in her ordering tone !!

Okay I said ... not wanting to spoil her mood in the morning !! and then lectures took over !!

Asad's POV

We were walking from the parking area when I saw zoya with some girl . I think her friend ! whatever ... but zoya looked beautiful ! she was wearing a long skirt and black top and no makeup !


I have never seen someone so beautiful !! but I noticed that she was a lil afraid ! because she give her signature smile !! it was just a faint smile ! so I was wondering what was wrong !!

I looked at Arjun who was drooling over her again ! and after she walked off with her friend !!

Arjun , I need to tell u something ! I said ..

Ofcourse go on man ... He said still smiling like an idiot !!

Stay away from Zoya !! I said sternly !

Why do u want me to stay away from someone so beautiful !!

Coz she doesn't like u !! I just said that !

And how do u know that ?? he asked !

Coz she didn't feel comfortable with u yesterday !!

Obviously she wouldn't coz it was the first time I met her ! and she seems pretty modern . Im sure the next we talk.. she's going to be okay !! he said proudly !!

But why r u so borthered about her being comfortable or not ?? a lil confused arnav & yash !!

Im not bothered im just saying !! okay we're getting late .. lets get goin !! I said not wanting to continue the conversation !!

The lectures were goin on but I was waiting for the lunch break and was hoping to see zoya and apologise to her about this stupid Arjun !!

In Zoya's class !

Zoya's POV

Dude zoya ...!! Whats up with u !! ?? where in the world are u ?? concentrate man !! rhea whispered !

Okay ! I said and smiled at her caring nature towards me !!

But I was just hoping that Asad wouldn't come to the canteen today as even rhea's goin to come to the canteen with me and I don't want rhea to meet asad before I tell her about yesterday ! Because then she's goin to get a bad impression on him which I don't want to happen !! Please Allah miya don't let asad come to the canteen !!

Precap : rhea meets asad and his friends in the canteen and finds out why zoya actually didn't attend lectures yesterday !

And that's it for this update ! thank you all for ur wonderful comments ! and please keep giving me ur reviews as the push me to the better ! sorry if there are any mistakes !!

Thank You ,

Pooja J

Edited by Poojabugga - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
nyc updt
zoya is afraid of reha
asad is smiling looking at black coffee
cont soon
thnx fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MagsDhingra

Hii dear.
I really luved ur update it was just amazing.
Nyc strt i must say.
Thnk God uh added zoya in first part, now its upon uh till how long uh want to skip her from ur earlier parts .
Ol d very bst for ur xam. Do well nd give us quick nd long updates😉.
Jab zoya samne ho toh asad miyan melt ho hi jate hai😉😆
Nyway plz continue soon. Nd ol d bst again


Thank u so much !! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it... It was vry nc..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey if u dnt mind may i knw whr r frm... R u a south indian ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey
Hope you are well
Lovely update, you really do write so well
Thank you for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Hey pooja

Firstly sory i forgot to unres d last part *holding ears and head down*

Now last part
It was awsum 👏 , they forgot about thee classes 😆
Arjun is flirty 😡
I m loving it

part 3

Superb update 👏
Rhea cares for zoya a lot, but y shw dnt like guyz an all 😕
Arjun still so flirty 😡
How did ayaan came to know about yesterday 😕
Precap was hell interesting
How would rhea react
eager to knw
Update soon 😛

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