A Broken heart deserves a second chance..-SS(KABHI)- Chapter 5 : pg-13 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey 'm sorr for the late comment

But i really liked this part 👍🏼

So they saw each other 😃

What's going to happen next 😕

Update soon please 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter Two

Rhea - zoya'schilhood friend , it'll be like a guest appearance ! and she zoya's best friend and some zoya trusts blind ! and rhea is very protective about zoya as she's jus came back from the US ! (now I know u'll be wondering how they're childhood frnd's when she's from the US ) (u'll get to know in the story !! And this character will be there for about 2 to 3 chapters !
And here u go Chapter 2 !!

Days passed and asad and zoya just kept smiling at each other everytime they came face to face ! but either of them had the courage to speak up !

Then one day a professor informed asad's class that there is a new admission .. and that its some girl .. all the boys went gaga on that news ... but asad was least bother .. then during the break he went to the canteen and he went to order his fav black coffee ... he found zoya there ...

Asad's POV !

I was goin to order my coffee and found Ms.Farooqui ordering something as well ...

I went and stood next to her and she looked at me and smiled like she always does ...
so I thought I'd strart the conversation when I heard her say ...

Hey! How are u ?? she said ..

Im good .. and u ? I replied ...

Im good too .. she replied and gave smiled again !! ( I seriously don't understand how this girl can keep smiling the whole day !!)

I didn't want the conversation to end but I don't know why !?!!

So how's college ?? I asked

Its good ..she said ...

We both got our orders and she said bye and left (with her signature smile) and when my eyes followed her to where she was going to sit .. I found her sitting alone ... and also realised that all the other tables were taken! And the only place available was the one in front of Ms.Farooqui !

So I walked up to her table...

Umm can I sit ? .. all the other place are taken ! I asked ..

Ofcourse ... she replied ...

And then we started talking and I must say we sat there for almost the whole day ...and just spoke ...At around 3 ... I saw arnav walking up to me and I realised that I missed all the classes after lunch !

Dude ! What the hell are u doin here ??? u bunked all the classes !! I didn't know that even Mr.Asad Ahmed Khan can bunk classes !! A lil confused Arnav yelled !

Stop elaborating it like as if I killed someone !! I was just caught up in a conversation and disn't realise the time !! I said softly so that zoya would hear !

WHAT ??? U WER CAUGHT UP IN A CONVERSATION !!!!????? ARE U KIDDING ME !! ?? Asad Ahmed Khan And getting caught up in a conversation ! dude u hardly talk to all of us !! now tell me who were u having this so called conversation that kept u away from classes ?? ;)

I was talking zoya .. I finally said !

ZOYA !! WHO the hell is Zoyaa ??? OMG don't tell me she's the girl who sang the other day !! he was litrally screaming !!

And then I told him to came down !!

zoya this is Arnav my classmate ! and Arnav this ZOYA !! I introduced them to each other !

I don't from where but Arjun just appeared and introduced himself !!

Hey , I'm Arjun ! Asad's classmate too !! He said !

I could see Arjun was already drooling over her !

And I realised that zoya was feeling a lil awkward ! so I decided to take these idiots away !!

Okay then ... it was really nice talking to u Ms.Farooqui ! I said

Same here Mr.Khan ... she replied ..

It was a pleasure meeting u zoya .. said Arjun .. in his stupid flirty voice ..!!

And then I had to litrally drag him out of the canteen !
and before leaving I took one last glimse of her .. she was talking to herself .. it seemed like as though she was scolding herself !! I laughed at her antics and walked off with Arjun & Arnav !!

Zoya's POV

Allah Miya what's wrong with me !! I hav never spoken to someone for so long and I totally forgot about my classes ! I'm sure Rhea's going to be realllyy mad at me ! firstly I haven't told her that I met a senior on the freshers day !! and today I sat in the canteen the whole afternoon talking to the same guy !!

But I must admit that Mr.Khan is a really nice guy !! And his eyes speak volumes !! I could stay here the whole day looking at them !!
zoya what's wrong with u !! how could u talk about a guy like this !! now shut up and get back to ur class idiot !! rhea'll be waiting !!! I said to myself and ran !!

I reached the class to find rhea in one of her worst moods!!

So I walked in and I smiled and said ...

Hey ! how were the classes ?? I asked !

O really that's what ur goin to ask after coming to class after 2 freaking hours ! ?? I thought u went to get some food !! where the hell were u ?? !! do u have any idea how worried I was !! Ur new to this country man !! u don't how stuff works over here !! and u promised me that u wont talk to anyone without me knowing that person !! ma nai chati hoon ki koi tumara boole paan ka faida utai !! But tum ho ki ... Now will just keep staring at me or will u tell me about ur whereabouts ??

Oh god she's really mad and know if I tell her about Asad now she'll think he's also one of the kind of people she's talking about ! so I'll tell her about him tomo ! pakka !! I thought ...

I'm so sorry ! I wen.. went to the canteen... I went to the canteen.. I was stammering !

Okay I got that u went to the canteen... rhea yelled !

To eat ! I went to the canteen to eat ! I was wondering wt I was blabbering !

Oh I didn't know .. I thought people go to the canteen to to pooja !

Oh .. actually I had my lunch and then ...and then I fell asleep ! ha ya I feel asleep ! u know know I can sleep anywhere ! and that today I had dosa for lunch and after eating dosa anyone can fall asleep ! im so sorry rhea !!

What u fell asleep in that noisy place ! oh why am I surprised !! u can sleep in a pub too !! okay now were getting late we have to leave come !! she said ...

I was surprised on how she got convienced with my stupid excuse but I understand she's been really worked up this week !! As we just shifted to our new flat !!

But I still am a lil worried on how im going to tell her about Asad ! I mean this is the first thing that I have hid from Rhea !! so I promise I will tell her everything tomo !! Promisee !!

So that's it ! it is pretty long ... and I hope u guys liked it !! Please give me ur reviews :D J i'm so sorry i didn't reply to all ur reviews ! coz my internet is not fast ! and i really wanted to update this part ! but i promise i will reply to all ur comments !!

Thank you

Pooja J

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Such an amazing start to a beautiful story am loving this
Edited by Saima-Syed - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

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Yupiee so i am first again 🥳

Wow yr lovely update

Zoya's entry was cool

Ayaan 😆

Asad gave a welcome speech and zoya sang a song, he was memerized by her voice and beauty 😳

Oho AAK complemented a girl 😉 😆

Plz update soon


Thank you so much !! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you so very much !! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: gowtu

Hey pooja... Hii.. It was vry nc.. I liked the cncpt... Hmm is sameera also n the same clg ? Gud wrk.. Lukng frwrd for nxt prts.. Nd al the bst for ur exm.. Continue soon..


Weel u'll hav to wait for some time to get know if weather she's in the same college or not ! :D

But thank u some for commenting ! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Linsie

nice story start young asad to college asad


Thank you :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: geet7057

Supeeerbbb...


continue sooon..

Gre8 job..

love the way u ryt.. :)

plz continue sooon


Thank you so much ! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinks2911

Ohh wow..! Senior and junior..!

I so love this concept..
Do continue soon.. And I would love receiving pms from you..
Already buddied yu!


Thank u and i will surely pm u the next part's link :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ohh zoya and her sily reasns 😛
Hmmm so arjun droolng over zoya tat makes asad problm 😉
Oh god asya spnded whle aftnun nt realsng d time 😳
oho no one wil go to canteen to do "pooja" 😉
Sory if am wrng!!i thnk ur frm south rite???

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