AsYa SS-The Boundaries That Separate Us Chapter 16 Updated Page 101 - Page 69

Originally posted by: _.Mehak._

Hey Preeti

This update was really good.

Thank you! :)

Many must be hating Sid. But I am loving that guy. He is hust too cute and descent as well. But you know what I imagine Karan Vahi as Dr. Sid in those parts where talks to them as Zoya's friend but as Asad's dr. He looks too young my mind just starts imagining the previous face you decided. xD

I love Asad and Zoya way too much as well, but here i stand by the fact that Sid is not at fault. Yes he did a mistake when they were young, but then almost everyone is immature in high school. Yeah it's hard to imagine Wahi in serious roles na... 😆

Asad collapsed, Cancer This name really scares me now.

It is scary, yeah...but we need to be strong and do our best to overcome it!

Asad being a bit emotionally week. This is very much realistic.
Would have loved it even more if in the last part, there was Zoya sitting beside him holding his hand.

I know there was no Zoya in the last part, but well they don't let other people in when this treatment is going on. I will show this from Zoya and Dilshad's side in next chapter.

Dilshad, This lady is too strong and as a person I love how mature she is in the tough phases of life and at the other time she is childlike.

Yes, she is class!

I want to write more about the update but I'm a bit busy ryt now.

Will edit later if I got time :)

This is already long enough, but i will be waiting xP

Take care. <3

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Well Preeti ,
Thank You so much for such a long and a Detailed reply.

Haha, thanks to you too! 😆

First come first about Asad...whatever you make him goo through and do...i will see this story through his Pain and POV only...
Well I know what he did was you know in a way direct and blunt...like on Sid's face but but , he will be cursingg his luck somehwere that first he has to be diagnosed like this and on that has to be treated by your Wife's Ex...How tricky this situation is and how insecure he must be.

Yes it is definitely hard!

And as you mentioned , see he controlled his anger and fear infront of Zoya when she didn't believed that...what he said..he is fighting and that too a long and many battles...with himself and with others and with CANCER also.

Yes he is indeed doing a commendable job! If there was someone else in his place, uska pata nahin kya ho chuka hota aab taq!

I hope what i said was proper.

Fully! I hope what i am saying is proper...of course Asad is at disadvantage here, too many insecurities...and that's what this story is about, overcoming all the insecurities aka boundaries. Here the "us" in the name of the story doesn't only stand for Asad and Zoya, it stands for many things, like the current Asad and the better Asad that he becomes.

Then came Sid...well not much to say..the man is honest and it was his sincereity that he spoke only truth with Asad without beating around the bush...that was good...but still I would still see him more as Zoya's Ex..and less of Asad's Dr.

Now, that's my responsibility to make you see him as a doctor! I hope i will achieve some success in that!

Now Dilshaad...we all know how lovely , strong and warming lady she was before the MKJ track...so yes it will be very very interesting to see her strength on board and how now also she gather her kids...and fight this disease with Asad..

Rest I am not a Sadist...and I don't like Heart wrenching , Painful and Sad parts...i feel Life mein pehle hee itni saare dard hai...Fiction toh aacha padhna chahiyeh na...but its fine i guess.
Chalo Rest assured..will wait for the Update...

I differ from that view sometimes. I am kind of a sadist haha...sad things have more and bahut jyada impact on me! Currently i am going through a phase when I am reading and watching only non-fiction stuff, it feels more real xP

Continue soonish.

#Mujhe 10 marks ki iss essay mein 8 toh milne chahiyeh hee...

Marks hmm...00000000000000000000000000000000000009.55555555555555 may be?😛

*My essay was longer xP*