Originally posted by: MayurChan
Hey Preeti.
Hope you have been fine and doing well..
I wish & pray ki your studies and work should not stress you out..as you have been...these days...
Coming to the Update..
It was good and a well written part..
But somewhere i feel the speed is little too fast yaa while editing it..their is no pause in btw scenes...dont wan't to be critical though..but still felt this...But i guess once you can take some time out regularly for this...that grip will also be back in the update..
Hope you don't mind me telling this.
A very good read..
Asad's part was touchy...he is really getting nervous...with the coming days as his chemotherapy sessions are starting...what it must be for the person who actually goes through this pain...
Anticipating more of such emotional moments in future updates i guess for a while...
Continue soonishh...
And Take Care.
124