AsYa SS-The Boundaries That Separate Us Chapter 16 Updated Page 101 - Page 73

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Hey Preeti.
Hope you have been fine and doing well..
I wish & pray ki your studies and work should not stress you out..as you have been...these days...
Coming to the Update..
It was good and a well written part..
But somewhere i feel the speed is little too fast yaa while editing it..their is no pause in btw scenes...dont wan't to be critical though..but still felt this...But i guess once you can take some time out regularly for this...that grip will also be back in the update..
Hope you don't mind me telling this.
A very good read..
Asad's part was touchy...he is really getting nervous...with the coming days as his chemotherapy sessions are starting...what it must be for the person who actually goes through this pain...
Anticipating more of such emotional moments in future updates i guess for a while...
Continue soonishh...
And Take Care.


Thank you, I am fine. 😳
Thanks for the honest reply, I will definitely try and work on it 😃
You take care too :))

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hope all of you are well!

Next update to be on 3rd November.

Take care.😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
When is the next update Preeti ? :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
I have my semester exams going on, so afterwards. 😔
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: FaultInMyStars

I have my semester exams going on, so afterwards.😔


Belated Happy Diwali Preeti..
Update when U have time...
And All the Best for this Semester exams.
Hope You have been doing well !!..
Take Care.
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Posted: 9 years ago
I missed se last 2 chap
So in New York
Asad and aid had the talk
Asad knows he loves zoya
And warns him tht zoya is his
He is determined to fight and get better for his love for his family
So he collapses and chemo starts
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