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rajnid68

@rajnid68

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Hi rivs...

What an update...

Awesome bracelet...asad does have a good choice..

Interlinked piece...their lives to be interlinked...

Zoya thinking of her future..with asad

The three different sets of people passing by her..

Did they help her to decide..where will she finally be happy

The flash mob..apt song for her..

Loved asad from the santas bag..

He proposed...in front of her family..

They helped him..

Fabulous..dont know any other way would have worked..

Lovely pics..and the video..

Thanks for the pm..

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Avie

@Avie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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GoodGoneWrong

@GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: manognasai
Wow...Its awesome!👏Truly its the best gift any girl can get on Christmas,to be with her family,her man proposing her for marriage...❤️Loved it a lot...I can imagine the scene while reading this!😃

Thanks dear. Yes since she is so attached to Christmas it kinda makes sense that Asad make it memorable for her.

I am glad you were able to visualize it. I was visualizing it too. I could see Zoya standing on the bench and dancing and Asad cringing yet smiling coz he did not want to ruin the moment.🤣

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: rajnid68
Hi rivs...
What an update...
Awesome bracelet...asad does have a good choice..
Interlinked piece...their lives to be interlinked...
Zoya thinking of her future..with asad
The three different sets of people passing by her..
Did they help her to decide..where will she finally be happy
The flash mob..apt song for her..
Loved asad from the santas bag..
He proposed...in front of her family..
They helped him..
Fabulous..dont know any other way would have worked..
Lovely pics..and the video..
Thanks for the pm..

Thanks Ranji. I loved it too..I scoured the net for hours but this was the only one I reallt liked. Charms made no sense since they barely knew each other, and hearts was too soon. Interlinks was perfect.

Yes, sometimes imagining a life with the other helps, but don't get too creative else it will be a disaster. 😆

I have loved this song since I watched Love Actually. I believe it was used in the end. So when I read the Christmas OS competition theme, the first thing that popped in my mind was this song.

Thanks dear.😃

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Anjinie
🥳beautifull

thanks

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: pinks2911

thanks😃

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Swetha Natarajan

@Aishdegreat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Wow!!! Lovely update...and the way u posted it with pics was so superb
It was a wonderful part.grt job

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GoodGoneWrong

@GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: ashrina
Wow!!! Lovely update...and the way u posted it with pics was so superb
It was a wonderful part.grt job

Thanks dear. I loved putting the pics so that it gives u a feel of the environment.

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Anitha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Beautiful story di👏
Fabulously written..
Whole scene was cute..
Thanks for the pm..

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@metoyou

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Posted: 11 years ago

#60

First things first: no res, no unres, just straight a comment!!!

Second, OMG OMG OMG...I want this Asad. BAS!

Third...let me breath... yes, I am here. Hosh aur awaaz mein.

The more she learnt of him, the deeper she fell in love with him (The more I remember AAK, the more I fall in love with him...)

Wasn't being in love all about this? Growing old with each other and still being in love? Did it really matter whether that would be in US or in India or for that matter in Timbuktu? (Yes, that is indeed what love is about. Growing old and falling in love again and again with that very same person... 😳BTW, you forgot Antarctica)

Asad stood there, in front of her, on the carriage, dressed to the nines in a tuxedo no less (Oh I like this, yes a black tuxedo makes him look yum) ☺️

he too was dancing with the mob (So cute) 😊

Asad was already in front of her, kneeling down on a bended knee (Proposal!!!) 😃

Now put that rock on my finger (Yeah baby) 😎

she had met a man who completed her (What else does a woman want?) 😳

Warning: this comment contains a highly romantic feeling. Read at your own risk.

A very good continuation of the first part. Again, the mood was spot on. I really liked the way you described Zoya's thoughts and feelings about her future with Asad and how much Christmas means to her.

Then came the first surprise: the flash mob! Very unexpected, but very pleasant surprised! I love flash mob (I have done it too, once).

Perfect choice of song, one of my favorite Christmas songs and surprisingly you did not use the original.

And then... Mr. Khan in a tuxedo! My oh my! Surprise number. A very handsome one 😉 I absolutely loved the way he proposed and how he all made this possible. Again, it brought me back into that Christmas mood and how I wished someone would propose me the same way 😳😆 This effort, love, romance is very much appreciated by girls like me.

Zoya is indeed a very lucky girl to have such wonderful people in her life; loving 'parents', friends and of course, the love of her life with whom she will walk, hand in hand, the path of life and make it the most beautiful and memorable journey...

I was right...this is indeed one of your best! 👏

LOVE LOVE LOVE, IT!!!❤️

Rivi, now I am totally into this very romantic mood. So don't blame me if I start to talk about my eye candies all day, all night long 😆