Asya TS: NYC Christmas - Last part, page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Awesome update !

love it !

eager to read the next one (:

thanks for your pm (:

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Oldestfan
I really like it when asad and zoya are nice to each other! 😉

When I have only two chapters to write a story, I have no option but to make them be nice.😉

Thanks for the comment and glad that u liked it.😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Surish

thanks dear

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jazsidhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

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hey tis is amazing...

luv it...

beautifully writen...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

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Juggaadd

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Posted: 11 years ago

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I am so glad you wrote again! Was really missing your stories. Waiting eagerly for the next parts.😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: juggaad
I am so glad you wrote again! Was really missing your stories. Waiting eagerly for the next parts.😊

Thanks honey...I missed writing too, but without the correct inspiration its hard to write.

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-
good job...loved it!!
continue soon

thanks...last part tomorrow.😃

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Juggaadd

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: QueenOfMyCastle

Thanks honey...I missed writing too, but without the correct inspiration its hard to write.

I hope Raquesh gives you the inspiration to write😆.

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GitaIyer

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Hey Rivs,

First and foremost, you write beautifully.🤗

I'm not too much into reading FFs, TS or OS. Glad, I read this one. It was really beautiful.

Secondly, I've never celebrated christmas, so got a glimpse of how christmas is celebrated.

Loved the way narrative intervened the present with the past. Now, waiting for the future.

She sighed longingly as she thought of last Christmas.

Intrigued, to know happened after last christmas. The 'sighed longingly' could mean anything. I can imagine a lot many things.😉

He gave her a shy smile as his hand rubbed the back of his neck. The dimple on his cheek played hide and seek while he continued to talk.

Reminded me of KSg's Asad.

"Oh good...good" he smiled to himself before he realized what he had said. "Woh...I mean... good night."

This 'Woh actually' i mean 'Woh... I mean' has a feel-good-factor.

It was Lovely Rivs. have bookmarked your index, will reply as and when I read each one of them.

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