Asya TS: NYC Christmas - Last part, page 8 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Ani-asya

Beautiful story di👏
Fabulously written..
Whole scene was cute..
Thanks for the pm..

Originally posted by: metoyou

First things first: no res, no unres, just straight a comment!!!

Wow...that is a feat in itself. What pray did I do get this honor?

Second, OMG OMG OMG...I want this Asad. BAS!

Go sit in Central Park mil jayega shayad. One of my friends from college, her hubby is like this. He used to bake us cookies when we would have to do all nighters on projects and even bring us food.😳 I told her to never let him go..and she did not.😃

Third...let me breath... yes, I am here. Hosh aur awaaz mein.

Itni excited. Must me real good. I thought u would feel its too cheezy. Boy was I wrong.

The more she learnt of him, the deeper she fell in love with him (The more I remember AAK, the more I fall in love with him...)

Arrey yaar...this man is not AAK. AAK will never in his life make a public spectacle of himself for Zoya.

Wasn't being in love all about this? Growing old with each other and still being in love? Did it really matter whether that would be in US or in India or for that matter in Timbuktu? (Yes, that is indeed what love is about. Growing old and falling in love again and again with that very same person... 😳BTW, you forgot Antarctica)

Aww..I forgot. But i like the sound of Timbuktu. BTW this was my answer when everyone asked me if I was ready to move back to India. "Its important to be togetehr, even if it is in an african jungle".😆🤣

Asad stood there, in front of her, on the carriage, dressed to the nines in a tuxedo no less (Oh I like this, yes a black tuxedo makes him look yum) ☺️

Yes I think he must be looking very yum.

he too was dancing with the mob (So cute) 😊

See. will AAK ever do something like this? Ever?

Asad was already in front of her, kneeling down on a bended knee (Proposal!!!) 😃

Yes Christmas proposal infront of a few hundred people. How romantic is that?😳

Now put that rock on my finger (Yeah baby) 😎

Once a drama queen always a drama queen.

she had met a man who completed her (What else does a woman want?) 😳

Just a few million dollars?😉

Warning: this comment contains a highly romantic feeling. Read at your own risk.

I am all for romance. Else I would not have written this.

A very good continuation of the first part. Again, the mood was spot on. I really liked the way you described Zoya's thoughts and feelings about her future with Asad and how much Christmas means to her.

Thanks dear. I was hoping it would come across.

Then came the first surprise: the flash mob! Very unexpected, but very pleasant surprised! I love flash mob (I have done it too, once).

Yes. Its not common here in India, atleast not for a proposal. But I have seen so many mob videos of proposals. I think they are the cutest. As long as u can carry it off.

Perfect choice of song, one of my favorite Christmas songs and surprisingly you did not use the original.

I too love it. Since I heard it in Love Actually. No I did not since i wanted the male version. Imagine AAK dancing to Mairah Carey's voice.😆

And then... Mr. Khan in a tuxedo! My oh my! Surprise number. A very handsome one 😉 I absolutely loved the way he proposed and how he all made this possible. Again, it brought me back into that Christmas mood and how I wished someone would propose me the same way 😳😆 This effort, love, romance is very much appreciated by girls like me.

When u find the man, direct him to me. I will make sure he knows of this wish. 😳

Zoya is indeed a very lucky girl to have such wonderful people in her life; loving 'parents', friends and of course, the love of her life with whom she will walk, hand in hand, the path of life and make it the most beautiful and memorable journey...

Yes she is. I want to fall in love all over again.

I was right...this is indeed one of your best! 👏

LOVE LOVE LOVE, IT!!!❤️

Thanks dear. It is coz it is full on romance. And short and concise. FF's are hard since there is alot more going on there.

Rivi, now I am totally into this very romantic mood. So don't blame me if I start to talk about my eye candies all day, all night long 😆

Please do. I will be all ears. U know where to find me.

Originally posted by: QueenOfMyCastle

Originally posted by: Oldestfan

Aww, thats sweet! You multi-media-ed your story!

Why, bhyyy did you not enter this for the Christmas Os context? Had a bit of a Dickensonian flavour to it.

Thanks for giving a bit of Christmas back to us! Lord knows, Christmas was wrenched away from a lot of us, seemingly to fall into the laps of a "select few" 🤣

Originally posted by: metoyou

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

hey a beautifull n lovely update...

the best surprise ever...

luv it...

its fabulous...

thx fr the pm...