ASYA TS: WITH YOU FOREVER ( Updated Chapter 3 last part)

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annanya

@annanyaksgian

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

lovely

i wish they showed such scene in the show

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--
This was indeed beautiful !! 👏
I wish they would have shown something like this !!
You should definately try writing some more stories 😳
Thanks for the pm !!

Thank You Bubble. Really appreciate your feedback. Will definately try and write more 🤗

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Simi

@saida.m

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Wow!

Great piece!!!

Write more often!!!! You portrayed the emotions well!!

👏👏

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: saida.m
Wow!

Great piece!!!
Write more often!!!! You portrayed the emotions well!!

👏👏

Thank you. Really appreciate your feedback.

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Aleena

@Asya_KaJen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Wow Man (Saif Ali Khan)

Seriously reading this made me cry
I have never cried on a story
I feel so so so so so so sorry for asad
You literally described each and every feeling of his which Gul hasnt done yet and you portrayed Zoya and his love in a lovely manner
Seriously wow Man

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Asya_KaJen
Wow Man (Saif Ali Khan)

Seriously reading this made me cry
I have never cried on a story
I feel so so so so so so sorry for asad
You literally described each and every feeling of his which Gul hasnt done yet and you portrayed Zoya and his love in a lovely manner
Seriously wow Man

Thankyou. Really appreciate your feedback.

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Saima Syed

@Saima-Syed

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

I want another OS and I want it now

Hope you have started writing one 😊

Mwah 🤗

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed
I want another OS and I want it now
I want another OS and I want it now
I want another OS and I want it now
I want another OS and I want it now

Hope you have started writing one 😊

Mwah 🤗

Am thinking of a scenario, will definately write something as have recieved a lot of appreciation for this os. Thankyou so much for your support.
🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

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Saima Syed

@Saima-Syed

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa

Am thinking of a scenario, will definately write something as have recieved a lot of appreciation for this os. Thankyou so much for your support.
🤗

Yayyy...you write so beautifully of course you are going to receive appreciation, seriously for a first OS it was...what's the word?... MashAllah.

You will always have my support 🤗

Getting madam ready for nursery and am off to work catch you later inshAllah.