ASYA TS: WITH YOU FOREVER ( Updated Chapter 3 last part) - Page 5

Originally posted by: Shubh007

<font color="#9900cc">AWSOME AND HEART TOUCHING OS...😊</font>

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<font color="#00ff00">REALLY LIKE TI TRUELY AWSOME OS...❤️</font>

Thankyou.

Hey There,

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Hey There,

It was very well scripted and conveyed emotionally by par.

I found it very nice to read. I prefer happy though, 😉 , Just letting you know because I think you have bitten the bug of creative writing and you will write a lot more in the future.

It was in short beautifully handled, I am sure you are very proud of this piece.

Congratulations on your first. Looking forward to your many more next ones.

Hey,

Thankyou sooo much for your encouraging words. I also love the happy ending ones but I feel in the end both Asad and Zoya were happy with eachother.

Will definately try and write something based on a happy ocassion for you. Thanks for your support dear. 😊

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA

Awesum os. Love it

Thankyou 😊

Hey

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

Hey

Hope ur well

Sooo how far you got with your second OS...I am in the need to read another one NOW lol

And by the way missy u missed my comment on page 7 lol

Take Care

Love Saima

Hey allz well here Hope ur well too.

Am still thinking of a plot for the os 😕. Will definately work something out just need some more time 😳😳😳 and I did read your comment on my phone but that damn gadget 😡😡😡 is so slow with some hardware issue I believe 😡😡😡. It sometimes doesnt even respond to what I want it to do 😡😡😡😡 so couldnt comment. Sorry 😔

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa

Hey allz well here Hope ur well too.

Am still thinking of a plot for the os 😕. Will definately work something out just need some more time 😳😳😳 and I did read your comment on my phone but that damn gadget😡😡😡 is so slow with some hardware issue I believe😡😡😡. It sometimes doesnt even respond to what I want it to do😡 so couldnt comment. Sorry 😔

Hey I was just having some fun no need to say sorry.

Can I suggest something. ..when it comes to story lines I normally pick out something from my personal life and elaborate on that...it could be a thought a wish a or even an actual event.

Just a thought to help u

Catch u soon...putting my mummy hat on now...going to pick up little on

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

Hey I was just having some fun no need to say sorry.

Can I suggest something. ..when it comes to story lines I normally pick out something from my personal life and elaborate on that...it could be a thought a wish a or even an actual event.

Just a thought to help u

Catch u soon...putting my mummy hat on now...going to pick up little on

Thanks for the sugestion dear. Am sure its going to help me. 😃😃😃😃

Originally posted by: Linnet

Felt really bad 4 asad

Heart touching update 😭

Keep writing

Love

Linnet

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Thank you. Really appreciate your feedback.😊